We were over before we began,
and my heart broke when I saw
it in your eyes the moment
you realized it too.
Maybe we could have lasted,
maybe we were supposed to be,
but in the end,
that was wasn’t enough.
© Sarah Doughty
For the #NovemberNotes challenge.
Hosted by myself and Rosema of A Reading Writer.
Today’s song is Perfect Strangers by Jonas Blue.
This post was very beautiful, and very heartbreaking. Unfortunately it is also very VERY true…
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Thank you!
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Oh my, sigh….💔💗
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💕💕💕
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It might be written by someone else in the past, yet it’s timely words are what keeps it alive.
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Oh, thank you so much! 😊
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Some times it’s never enough cause it was never meant to be.
Beautifully penned down Sarah!😃
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So true. Thank you!
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😊
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That’s the real tragedy. Two people in love who can’t make it work.
Very well written Sarah!
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So true. Thanks for the kind words.
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I’m just quoting Gilian Flynn. Guess I should’ve given her credit first! XD XD (Couldn’t find the laughing smiley, had to make do with this XD.)
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Oh that’s okay. 😊 Thanks for clarifying. 😊
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maybes never are enough but they keep some of us going. They kindle lights for us to follow toward a future hope 🙂 Brilliant as always Sarah!
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Aw thanks! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Great piece. Stay awesome
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Thank you so much!
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A poignant and great take on today’s prompt Sarah. It made me think that in some relationships we can be complete strangers.
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Yes, exactly. And that’s a shame.
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awww… </3
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Thank you! 😊
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oh this… 😦 😦 😦
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Awww. 💕
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Nice!
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Aw thanks!
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*Siiiiiiiiigh*
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Aww thank you.
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some things aren’t meant to last. the earliest you realize the better for everyone. nice.
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Indeed. Thank you! 😊
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you welcome
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we shared the feeling of oneness
fear deep within stayed
separation was a negative thought
trust no more was strength
faith lost its value
love lost its color
feelings changed
we changed
all got over
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I understand.
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I know you do understand my thoughts
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