Granting access to me
As I am granted my wish
The lips on your neck
Causes shivering in me too
As we get more closer
Becoming one of two
Life is love they say
Love is what we are making
To live life now
Yes, when done well, it is amazing. It’s something I’ve toyed with, but never produced much that I like. I may be too long winded for micropoetry 😉
I do think one of the challenges of any good poetry is knowing where to stop. Say too much and you can ruin a good poem. Don’t say enough, it feels like a fragment. It’s something I still struggle with from time to time. Good micropoetry is impressive because it feels complete even if it’s only a few lines long.
I’m still in the early stages. I know the overall plot, but I’m still filling in blanks (specific scenes). It’s next on my list after I do another edit of Safe. 🙂
Sarah Doughty 
A shiver runs up my spine
As my lips lower down
A gaze at the beautiful breast
Is the cause of shivering I know
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Granting access to me
As I am granted my wish
The lips on your neck
Causes shivering in me too
As we get more closer
Becoming one of two
Life is love they say
Love is what we are making
To live life now
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Ooooh
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Awww emotions got going
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if there is a melted puddle i am that now. haha. lovely, love!
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Hahaha, I understand.
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😀 😀 😀
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Nice when we get the green light.
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Very cool!
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Thank you! I’m glad you like it, John. 🙂
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I like it because it tells do much in so few lines.
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That’s what I like about micropoetry. If done correctly, it could have multiple meanings and pack a powerful punch. 😊 Thank you! 😊
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Yes, when done well, it is amazing. It’s something I’ve toyed with, but never produced much that I like. I may be too long winded for micropoetry 😉
I do think one of the challenges of any good poetry is knowing where to stop. Say too much and you can ruin a good poem. Don’t say enough, it feels like a fragment. It’s something I still struggle with from time to time. Good micropoetry is impressive because it feels complete even if it’s only a few lines long.
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Trust me, it took almost a whole year to figure it out.
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I like it. Almost a classic feel to it. Reminds me of old Black & White horror films. ^_^
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Oh thank you! That’s actually pretty close to the image I’ll be using when I share it on Instagram later this evening. 😊
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my favorite vampire. nice.
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Right? It’s a little teaser for Liam’s book which will hopefully come out in a year. 🙂
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can’t wait to read that. nice teaser.
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I’m still in the early stages. I know the overall plot, but I’m still filling in blanks (specific scenes). It’s next on my list after I do another edit of Safe. 🙂
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i am going nowhere – take your time.
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😊 😊 😊
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*shivers* Thanks once again 🙂
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No, thank you! 🙂 🙂
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He isn’t a vampire, is he? Lovely poem.
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Yep, he is. I’m following a Halloween theme this month! Thank you!
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