Oooh…says so much in so little. Eyes really are the windows to the soul and I find that you can learn so much just from looking deep in someone’s eyes. Amazing, Sarah!
the eyes – window to the mind. i like the subtle inference of mistaken mind-reading in this piece. debunks the myth ‘look me in the eye and tell me you love me.’ brilliant piece. the eyes – are not always a window to a mind.
Yes, indeed. When my husband (then, soon to be boyfriend) looked at me like that, I thought my stomach was going to explode (in a good way), and I’ve always loved the color of his eyes. 😊
Sometimes there’s not much left to the, imagination, but that’s sort of the beauty of poetry isn’t it? The writer can choose what to reveal or not, in this case. 😊
Sarah Doughty 
I once…or three times met this girl with these green eyes…that was something
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Oh yes. My husband’s eyes are this brilliant blue. My son has the same colors and I adore them. 😊
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now i am officially a puddle! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Awww💖
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😀 😀 😀
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Eye vice, the spice of romance. Love it The eyes carries the beauty of the soul.
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Yes, they do! Thank you!
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The “eyes” have it.
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Yes, they do! Thank you!
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Oooh…says so much in so little. Eyes really are the windows to the soul and I find that you can learn so much just from looking deep in someone’s eyes. Amazing, Sarah!
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It’s a great feeling. 😊
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the eyes – window to the mind. i like the subtle inference of mistaken mind-reading in this piece. debunks the myth ‘look me in the eye and tell me you love me.’ brilliant piece. the eyes – are not always a window to a mind.
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Exactly! Thank you so much! 😊
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my pleasure!
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Excellent!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site and commented:
By the lovely Sarah Doughty.
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Ha! I got the be like 100! 😆
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Haha, congratulations! 😊
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Woohoo! I will accept this ⛤ as my prize!
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Boom! There it is…
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😊 😊
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❤
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So hard to be careful after seeing what was there.
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Yes, indeed. It’s like a spell or something. You just can’t seem to find the willpower to look away, or care that in the end, you’ll be crushed. 😊
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Those seductive eyes…lol. Beautiful
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Indeed! 😊
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Oh… love. ♥
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Thank you, love! 😊
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Must be some eyes!
Beautiful, sweet and short, to the point.
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Yes, indeed. When my husband (then, soon to be boyfriend) looked at me like that, I thought my stomach was going to explode (in a good way), and I’ve always loved the color of his eyes. 😊
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Love this.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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A whole story encapsulated in two verses. A seed of a poem that unfolds in the reader.
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at at times sometimes no fuckign way
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Sometimes there’s not much left to the, imagination, but that’s sort of the beauty of poetry isn’t it? The writer can choose what to reveal or not, in this case. 😊
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on things of interest the imagination reigns
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Very true.
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Thank you so much, Kristian! I like to let readers fill in their own scenarios. 😊
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You’re welcome, Sarah! And you definitely know how to do it!
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Awww… 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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Nice
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Thank you!
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