“Where did your heart go?”
she cried out, wondering
how he learned
to be so cruel.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Where Did Your Heart Go by @audrinalanege
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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So much emotion in a few words,love this!
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Thank you. 😊
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your word are my life, sometimes
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I’m so sorry to hear that. You aren’t alone.
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Simple but with such a punch to the guts. Thank you for the interest in my blog!
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It was my pleasure. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment! 😊
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some people are born curel
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Indeed they are. Psychopaths are more rare than sociopaths (which are almost the same except something makes them that way, they aren’t born with it).
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it’s a choice
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Perhaps. For sociopaths maybe, but I think sometimes it just happens naturally.
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yeah
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nothing can make you do anything that way unless you want to do it
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Both psychopaths and sociopaths lack emotion and cannot reason right from wrong. The bug difference is being born that way vs becoming that way. Often, they lack any regard whatsoever when it comes to laws and proper behavior in society. The really creepy part is when they learn to fake emotion and false empqthy so well, you’d never know it was all a lie. I’m not a psychiatrist, but from my knowledge it’s not always a choice to become a sociopath, it sort of just happens.
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it was only visiting a mind nurtured by causal determinism. what we truly are is what emerges when tranquility is rattled. brilliant post.
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Exactly. Sometimes I wonder how I managed to be so ‘good’ when I went through so much. Maybe it was easier for other to just stop feeling.
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because good was there first. you’ve done amazingly well. i am proud of you.
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Thank you so much. I’m always grateful for your support. 😊
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because the work is brilliant.
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Thank you. I’m honored. 😊
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short yet packed!! great, love! ❤
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Thank you so much! 😊
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always my pleasure, love!
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There is such a thing as casual cruelty, that natural cruelty that one is not even aware of. The kind learned through watching, taught through example.
Tis not that his heart be missing, but instead that his heart beat to a drum quite different than others.
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Very true. Thank you so much! 😊
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I like the economy of words. Less is always more when it’s done well.
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Ah, thank you so much! 😊
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It’s amazing the depth of emotion you convey with so few lines, Sarah.
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Oh thank you, love! 😊
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Beautiful but so sad words Sarah. xx
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Thank you so much! 😊
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It is still there, just broken.
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So very true.
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Ah yes this resonates with me. I said something along those lines many times 😦
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Awww, I’m sorry to hear that.
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Thanks – it’s all in the past now 🙂
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I agree with everybody, he never had one to begin with. It was all for show. To make himself feel better… Amazing writing. XOXO
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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At least we learn to be cruel, which means that fundamentally we’re kind. Would be worse the other way around.
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True. Not everyone learns, but most do.
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This is so real. How many people think they are getting involved with one person and the person turns out to be another.
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So true. 😊
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That’s always a question I ask… It’s like something snaps in them…
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It’s very unfortunate.
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I know where it went or maybe not at all…
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Yeah, I think the key here is whether there was a heart at all.
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Everyone has a heart my dear, some don’t know what exactly to do with one
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That’s true. 😊
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