The tangle of bramble and thorns catch me at every turn, slicing into me and holding on for dear life. No matter what I try, I can’t escape. But I know I’ll find my way out. I have to, because I can’t let a few scratches bleed me dry.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Thistle & Thorn by @beccaleepoetry
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Metaphor aside. Brer rabbit, he say, “Oh, Brer Fox, doan go throwin’ me in de briar patch.” Because sometimes a few scratches and tears beats the hell outta being bled dry.
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True. 😊
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Again. Perfect combination of photo and words/micro-story.
This I felt could be tattooed or on a t-shirt because they are words we should live by and do live by and need reminding of
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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Well done lovely one. xo
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😊😊
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This poem just reminds me and encourages me, to pick myself back up; after life kicks me in the groin. Thank you for sharing.
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Aw you’re very welcome! 😊
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Yes! *punches the air* Powerful words. And I love it! That last sentence especially, I feel like printing it and framing it above my desk lol
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Oh that’s such an honor. You’re more than welcome to do so, I just ask that you keep my name on it. 😊😊
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Of course! Your name and your words go hand in hand 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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Very well written…I felt touched by it.
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊
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You are very welcome!
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Great piece!
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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Yes!
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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My pleasure, as always 🙂
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Love the fierce determination here, despite the pain. Well done.
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Ah, thanks so much! 😊 😊
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perfectly paired visual and vocal poetry. pierces deep.
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Ah, thanks so much! 😊
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there is fierceness in pain! this is, as always, epic!
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Ah, thanks, love! 😊
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you’re always welcome dear!!!
BTW, I’ve read in your IG about the picadilly challenge. (I am not sure if I remember it right haha). I would like to join. 😉 May I ask how will it work? 😀 Thank youuu!
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Yep, the prompt is “Write a journal entry dated ten years in the future.” it’s due on the 11th and you can respond however you want.😊 😊
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oooooooh!!! alright dear!!! got to do that soon! thank youuu!
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You’re welcome! 😊
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BTW, those journals are for sale where? it is also available here in the Philippines?
P.S. Sorry for bombarding you with question love. ❤
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If there’s a Barnes and Noble (or if shipping is available) you should be able to find them. If you have trouble I can check with them to see where you can get them.
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alright! thank you! 😀
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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😀 😀 😀
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I’ll host one like that every two weeks, and I think at the end Piccadilly will do a giveaway to participants. But they haven’t announced it officially yet.
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ooooh! that would be great!!!
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“Because I can’t let a few scratches bleed me dry.”
There it is, Sarah and it is golden! Yes, Gawd!
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Thanks so much! 😊 😊 😊
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You’re most welcome!
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Nicely worded! Great imagery here, so much suspense!
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Oh thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome!
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A lot of the barriers we have in life seem scarier and stronger than they really are. Sometimes you have to push past the pain to get where you truly want to be.
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Exactly! Thank you so much! 😊
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You are a fighter. A few scratches will not stop you. As for me, I don’t like scratches. They can burn.
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Indeed they can. Thank you as always! 😊
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I don’t know what I like better, the imagery or saying “the tangle of bramble.”
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Oh, thank you! 😊 😊
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Powerful, wow. Love it!
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Thank you!
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Lovely imagery. I narrowly escaped the literal version of this: when I was a child my parents had a cholla cactus on the back porch. I never ran into it, but a friend did at a birthday party. My mom spent an hour tweezing needles out of her leg. Unsurprisingly, it was my last birthday party.
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Yikes, I’m sorry to hear that.
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The sound of scratched heartstrings. Poignantly beautiful.
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Thanks so much! 😊
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Teach them a lesson they`ll never forget!
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Ha! Thank you! 😊 😊
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Heartbreaking 💕
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It is, but it still remains hopeful.
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Short, but poignant.
Love your work Sarah.
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Ah, thank you so much! 😊
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