the window is always a symbol of a tortured life craving release. but in this piece, this idea is reversed. here, the mind (shadows) offers more than the unknown that lies outside the window. beautiful piece. i just love the tripple layers (window. moon. shadows) of intrusion.
This one fascinates me. It sounds like the MC is trapped (by magic perhaps) in the patch of light from an upstairs window. There’s a whole story waiting to be written there. 😀
Sarah Doughty 
Lovely! I’m always so jealous of poets.
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Don’t be. I’m honored. 😊
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wow. I have missed your little poetic bites. This one is superb!
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Aww thank you!
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You’re welcome😊
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Beyond perfect
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Aw thank you! 😊
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It is a pleasure
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“moonless sky” i meant to write as the second layer of intrusion.
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No worries. I knew what you meant!
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the window is always a symbol of a tortured life craving release. but in this piece, this idea is reversed. here, the mind (shadows) offers more than the unknown that lies outside the window. beautiful piece. i just love the tripple layers (window. moon. shadows) of intrusion.
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Aww thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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love the way you reverse images and metaphors in your works.
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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This one fascinates me. It sounds like the MC is trapped (by magic perhaps) in the patch of light from an upstairs window. There’s a whole story waiting to be written there. 😀
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Oh yes. Exactly. Not quite magic, but trapped by fear. It’s not a secret in my books as to why.
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Such lovely writing =)
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Aw thank you!😊
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Well done, thanks for the visit I appreciate it
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Of course! It was my pleasure. 😊
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Ooh interesting! I’d love to be swept away by the shadows as well
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Thank you! I thought this was fitting for the winter solstice. 😊😊
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Beautiful, my dear Sarah ~
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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You are so welcome
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Excellent!
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Thank you!
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In those Shadows
In the darkness of night
I feel your absence more
Thus I feel to be lost again
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Aw. 💕
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I do get lost in your words
There is a beauty in what you write
Every poem you bleed
I feel myself in it deep
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Aww thank you!
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As always welcome and you know that right….
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I do.
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😊 sweet kind you
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