The silence it was for many
The atmosphere calm for many
Those words when you uttered
I felt of ground and shattered
Still deafended I feel
When breeze whispers into me
Those words come back again
Makes me happier and sad within
Aw thank you! It’s one of those things I’ve spent nearly two years practicing. In a sense, it’s almost too easy for me now. With the holidays and all the commotion going on, I’ve come back to these. Once the year ends, I hope to push myself into new boundaries.
Wonderful piece!
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Aw thanks! 😊
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Most welcome, Sarah!
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Powerful
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Thanks! 😊
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Always a pleasure
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Yeah…I dig that
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Thank you!
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Love that description, of silence yet deafening at the same time.
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Oh yes. I was hoping it would make people think a little bit.
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The silence it was for many
The atmosphere calm for many
Those words when you uttered
I felt of ground and shattered
Still deafended I feel
When breeze whispers into me
Those words come back again
Makes me happier and sad within
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I understand.
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Yes you do thus I write
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😊😊
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Love it!! ❤
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Thank you!
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How do you manage to pack so much emotion into such a short poem? It’s wonderful! I love your work.
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Aw thank you! It’s one of those things I’ve spent nearly two years practicing. In a sense, it’s almost too easy for me now. With the holidays and all the commotion going on, I’ve come back to these. Once the year ends, I hope to push myself into new boundaries.
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Well I cannot wait to see what you come up with next!
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Wonderful imagery!
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Thank you! 😊
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WOAH!!!
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💖😊💖
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Hope the words have not choked,
the nectar of love have soaked.
the smoke can ignite another fire,
listen to church bells and choir.
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Nice! Thank you!
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vestige vapor
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Thank you!
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I’m reminded of the hissing of a snake…
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Yes!
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I love it!
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Thanks, love!
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Interesting imagery! Nice work
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Thank you!
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to love is to love
with a risk
of losing
and being
hurt
to feel
is no big deal
just a large palobric
learning curve
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Indeed!
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WOW Pretty incredible.!
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊 😊
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