Feel the softness of my flesh,
without worrying about
the layers beneath
or the scars that mark it.
See the depth in the
cold stormy seas of my eyes
and hear the truth mixed with
the agony beating within my heart.
Taste my lips with abandon,
like I dream of devouring yours,
then I will no longer remember
to breathe anything but you.
© Sarah Doughty
I absolutely loved reading this. Such passion and a beautiful depth. I am glad I stumbled upon your blog.
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I appreciate that you stopped by. Welcome.
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I would really appreciate it if you could have a look at my page as well, would love to hear the views especially from a gifted writer such as you. Cheers! 🙂
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I will do that. Thank you.
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Oh my god! This is so good 🙂 Love your writing.
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Thank you! That means so much to me. 😊
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Absolutely!
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Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Annie<3
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Beautiful!
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Many thanks!
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An amazing writing of the way every woman wants to feel. Beautiful!
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Thank you, I appreciate that. 😊
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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Reblogged this on Lost Dudeist Astrology.
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Wow…
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Thank you! 😊
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Beautiful imagery you paint with those words.
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Thank you.
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Its true in all lust filled relationship, its very superficial ,you got it right
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Keep Writing 🙂
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Thank you. 😊
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Such sadness, unfortunately, seems to produce the most beauty. This is a wonderfully sad piece.😔
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Thank you.
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Possibly my favorite thing of yours I’ve read. Sensual, yet tinged with tragedy. Or that’s how I take it anyway.
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It definitely is.
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Wow!who needs real life experiences when there are such passionate words?!
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Thank you. The human experience is both beautiful and tragic.
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Absolutely beautiful, Sarah! 🙂
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Thank you so much, love! 😊
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Most welcome!
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I have to try one day to write a love poem, a serious love poem. You gotta learn from the best here, that´s you by the way.
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Oh wow, thank you for the lovely compliment. And I look forward to reading it.
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Hope not to dissapooint
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I highly doubt you could disappoint anyone of you tried.
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