It’s been ages since
I’ve held you in my arms.
To say that I miss you
is an understatement,
but what I miss the most
is how free I felt
in those moments
it was just you and me
and the air we shared.
I don’t know, Sarah, your imagination certainly has wings. This poem is ethereal. That last line, it was as if that “shared air” made me weightless. When one has such memories, the loss is cancelled out. Give me the memories any day – I can have those forever.
I love this one! On first readthrough, it sounds like it’s pretty straightforward – about that one special someone who got away. But then when I read it again, I realized it could have a couple of other interpretations. And that’s what makes it awesome. 😀
The air is no more same
The sunshine no more bright
The stars no more twinkle
The moon no more shows way
The touches no more felt
The heart beat no more sings
The soul is no more dancing
You left
Everything changed
Poignant!
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Oh wow!
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💖💖💖💖
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Beautiful!!
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Thanks so much! 😊
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Simply ethereal! Thank you for this beautiful piece, Sarah! ❤
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Simply beautiful! ❤
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Awww! Thank you! 😊
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Good one Sarah.. Good to know you! 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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sigh. sigh. sigh. soooo good. ❤
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I don’t know, Sarah, your imagination certainly has wings. This poem is ethereal. That last line, it was as if that “shared air” made me weightless. When one has such memories, the loss is cancelled out. Give me the memories any day – I can have those forever.
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Aw thank you so much! 😊
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Oh my… this is perfectly written. ♥
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Of course ♥
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~big sigh~ love it! 🙂
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Aw thank you! 😊
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I love this one! On first readthrough, it sounds like it’s pretty straightforward – about that one special someone who got away. But then when I read it again, I realized it could have a couple of other interpretations. And that’s what makes it awesome. 😀
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Aw thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Love this! 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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I feel that this poem about love not yet lost, or lost a very long time. Am I right? Also, thank you for your support!
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It’s reminiscent of things lost, but without pinpointing a certain time frame. That is up to you to interpret. 😊 Thank you for the kind words!
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Inner freedom within the realm of love and partnership – how well put!
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Thank you! 😊
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Simply amazing! I can’t tell you how accurate that feels to me right now.
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Thank you! I’m honored. 😊
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Gorgeous!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful regret!
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Thank you!
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clever. did a babe come between man and woman.
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More like death, but I left it open to interpretation. 😊
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If they ever invent a machine that allows to travel through a person’s mind, I want you to book me a place on the first tour!
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Aww thank you. But I doubt you’d want to witness the bad stuff. 😊
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There are locked doors in all the best museums 😉
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True.
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Damn, you’ve got to hate that when it happens!
But then everything has changed!
chris
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Indeed. Thank you.
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i believe that i walked into the fire, holding magick!
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😊
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The air is no more same
The sunshine no more bright
The stars no more twinkle
The moon no more shows way
The touches no more felt
The heart beat no more sings
The soul is no more dancing
You left
Everything changed
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Awww so sad.
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Sad with smiles lol
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beautiful post
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Sorry, you somehow ended up in my spam folder. Thanks for the kind words!
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