My body rots in the warm sun. It pierces my skull like a thousand tiny blades cutting with perfect precision to make each jab hurt worse than the last. This, my brightened surroundings, are rays beating down onto my scorched flesh, laughing at my inability to coexist in its presence. It taunts me, reminding me that I don’t belong. But I know my place. My soul lives among the shadows, dances with the moon, and twinkles with the stars in the night sky. This, where my demons live and thrive, is my prison. This, my world of darkness, is my salvation. This, where anything is possible, is my redemption. This is my playground.
© Sarah Doughty
Photo and edit are mine.
in the real world; some students think i was a freak because i was the only one who believe in those fairytale things, but i was covering in blood (like carrie white) and showed my revenge to them so they could died (and they did). hyde enjoyed what i did and said “isn’t this fun, is like a favorite playground of mine and yours”.
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Love the darkness of this! Great juxtaposition, have you had anything published? If not you should push it because this is awesome! 😀
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Yes, actually! It’s been posted at Crossing Genres, a publication at Medium. 😊 Thank you!
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Damn woman, you are amazing. You captured this moment perfectly. I bow down to your awesomeness!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Aww thank you. This one I really loved.
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This right here is why I read poetry. It inspires me to be a better, less lazy writer.
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Lazy isn’t really a word I would use in writing. Sometimes you’ll feel the words itching to crawl out. That’s when things line this are born. Other times is more of a feeling of emotions. But that’s not lazy.
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It’s a word I use for me in writing. For the times when I could dig deeper and make the writing better, but instead I just write the generic version and move on.
When I read poetry (like this) it inspires me to think more about how and why I’m using the words I’m using.
There’s a reason writing a short story is harder than a novel. I feel like it’s even more so with poetry.
Much love for the poets ❤
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Thank you. I understand what you mean.
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Wow, what an amazing piece of truly incredible literature, loved to read it!
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Thank you so much! I really loved writing it!
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thank you!
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Lovely and yet excruciating
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It is, thank you.
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This was dark and amazing. I love dark!
Rian @ https://riandurants.wordpress.com/
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Thank you! 😊
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It’s unsettling sometimes how the darkness could make you calm and comfortable (to a degree). Dark yet mesmerizing story, Sarah. 💕
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Thank you. It’s a strange juxtaposition. I’m terrified of the night because of what happened to me when I was a kid, yet at the same time, I still have a fondness for it (safely inside my home, of course).
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I’m sorry to hear that something bad happened to you in your past. Light and hugs to you, Sarah. ❤️
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Thank you. It’s something I deal with every day.
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BEAUTIFUL. ❤
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Thanks so much! 😊
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This, that I’m reading, is beautiful! 🙂
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Haha, clever. Thank you! 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Very dark Sarah. Very graphic
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Thank you! 😊
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A dark, disturbing write. Well done.
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Thanks so much! 😊 😊 😊
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Some really nice juxtaposition here. The ideas of playground and pleasure against pain and prison. It dances nicely in the middle.
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Thank you! That was the intention I wanted. 😊
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Wow. This is beautiful in it’s dark way. And it’s totally weird that I wrote a short poem today called ‘darkness’ (a limerick, actually)… It seems we are on the same page!
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Today must be a dark day indeed. Wavelengths.
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Ironically, the first day in what seems like weeks that I’ve escaped rain and have seen the sun!
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Very nice. A little lament for the dark, perhaps?
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So very vivid, disturbing, and beautiful
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Thank you, it was something I felt very deeply today.
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Loved this Sarah 🙂
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Thank you!😊 😊
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I love how a basic word can have such deep meaning!
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Thank you. I’m honored. 😊
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