“Don’t look away, darling.
My brokenness is reflected in your eyes.”
Can you feel it too? How we share a similar haunted past? What it means to feel like there’s nothing left of you but a husk — a memory in a living body? Who we were then, and what we’ve become now? When we felt whole and happy, and the moment it all changed — when the world turned into the dark place we know so well today?
So please, darling. Don’t look away. We feel alone, but at the same time, we are in this together. You don’t have to feel so lost. Because I’m here.
I’m always here. In the dark. With you.
© Sarah Doughty
In the dark with you.
Powerful message
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Thank you, my friend!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Great words
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Thank you!
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Your style is so natural – I’m in love! This reads with the flow of poetry and yet has the splash of conversation.
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Oh thank you so much for the kind words! I’m honored. 😊
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You’re very welcome 🙂 How long have you been writing?
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A long time. Publicly almost 4 years now.
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The time and effort that you’ve put into your craft shines through! I’m excited to read more.
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Thank you so much!
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Sarah, I love your poem. It describes powerfully how one can move through some of the most difficult times in life. I hear courage, determination and hope in the midst of despair. Beautiful.
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Oh thank you so much for the kind words. I was hoping that those hopeful, positive things would be apparent beneath the overarching tone of the piece. I’m glad you were able to see them. 😊
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This is soooo heartfelt. 😍
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Aww thank you, sweet soul!
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😘😘😘
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“..but at the same time, we are in this together. You don’t have to feel so lost. Because I’m here. I’m always here. In the dark. With you.” I love how this feels like an accepting embrace. Just so big and warm. So lovely.
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Oh thank you, love. That was exactly what I was hoping for!
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You’re totally welcome!😊
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This is really excellent and heart tugging !!
Always see the lighter side of him and you can feel that he is the shadow behind you !!
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Aww yes indeed. Thank you so much!
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YES!
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Yay! Thanks, lovely!
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