“And I could see how she ate up every one of your lines. Just like I did.”
Maybe it was all in my head, all those things you said to me. How you said them. How you looked at me. Like I was the only thing in your world that mattered. To me, it felt like everything else disappeared when we were together. We were happy then, you and I. At least that’s what I thought until I saw you with her. The same smile and look in your eyes as you told her how she was your world. And I could see how she ate up every one of your lines. Just like I did.
How could I have been so blind?
Or, maybe, you’re just that talented at lying.
© Sarah Doughty
Sadly, I feel like this happens to people =(
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I agree. It’s so sad.
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Love this. All of this. “Talented at lying” drove it home.
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It’s unfortunate that the so many people out there with this ability. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Heartbreaking, but great piece, Sarah!
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Thank you, lovely!
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Amazing!!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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dayummm girl that is deep. i was going through that n reading it was ike you explained my mind better that i could…
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Thank you for the kind words.
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I just read, and re read, and read again.
The face of the heartbreak, and the words of hurt are same everywhere! Loved this 💜
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Thank you so much for the kind words. I’m honored.
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1 small typo in 2nd last line, but aside from that, great poem
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Thank you for letting me know! I’ve fixed it.
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You’re most welcome, glad I could help 🙂
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Those lips she used to kiss now laid upon another, granted her compass to discover the lessons of caution, the teachings of a broken heart and curriculum of a fresh start.
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That’s lovely, thank you.
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“And I could see how she ate up every one of your lines.” Idk why, this one really hit me
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Thank you so much!
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