What I love, as a reader, is that although I hear and feel the rumblings of your personal story in the pieces you write, there is something that resonates with my own story. I think it changes the meaning, or the focus. And although I still feel your intent, it becomes personal for me too.
For example, the stanza “You showed me
that my past
doesn’t define me,”
reminds me of something my sister once said to me. We lost three of our grandparents in 2 1/2 years, and she said, “You can’t let their deaths become part of your identity.You are more than a person who has suffered a lot of loss.” It is a part of my past that I struggle to keep from defining me.
I completely understand. I write from a place I know, but I also tend to leave things open enough that people can interpret how it best relates to them. I’m glad this piece could do that for you. 😊
Thank you so much! I try to guide readers to a certain extent, and then let them go from there on their own. 😊 I’m glad I could accomplish that for you.
“You are
the wild light
amongst the darkness.” I love that the “You” being addressed in the poem isn’t just a light. They’re a “wild” light. It’s like a powerful and untamed light that the darkness can’t touch. 🙂
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Sarah Doughty/Heartstring Eulogies
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oh what I have been missing not reading your poetry. love this Sarah!
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Aww thank you for the kind words! I’m honored! 😊
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Nice, this has an epic feel!
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Oh thank you! 😊 😊
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Oh my! Thank you!
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So beautiful!!!
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Aw thanks! 😊
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Hi. I just nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award x
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Thank you for the honor! I’ve already received this award, but I’ll add your name to the list of nominees! 😊
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Thank-you x
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I’ve missed your posts!
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Aw thanks! 😊 😊
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Aww, the wild light among the darkness…I love that. *swoons* ^_^
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😊😊😊😊
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the wild light…love this!
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Aw thank you, Holly!
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You have wonderful ability. I really enjoy your poems.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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I LOVE this!! One of my favorites.
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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Love this Sarah! I’m going to share this with my husband.😊
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Please do! Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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He loved it!
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Awesome! 😊 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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What I love, as a reader, is that although I hear and feel the rumblings of your personal story in the pieces you write, there is something that resonates with my own story. I think it changes the meaning, or the focus. And although I still feel your intent, it becomes personal for me too.
For example, the stanza “You showed me
that my past
doesn’t define me,”
reminds me of something my sister once said to me. We lost three of our grandparents in 2 1/2 years, and she said, “You can’t let their deaths become part of your identity.You are more than a person who has suffered a lot of loss.” It is a part of my past that I struggle to keep from defining me.
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I completely understand. I write from a place I know, but I also tend to leave things open enough that people can interpret how it best relates to them. I’m glad this piece could do that for you. 😊
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Superb!
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Thank you!
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I love at how seemingly simple this is but at the same time it gave me a really complex emotions…(in a really good way though)
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Thank you so much! I try to guide readers to a certain extent, and then let them go from there on their own. 😊 I’m glad I could accomplish that for you.
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As always..Sarah..
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“You are
the wild light
amongst the darkness.” I love that the “You” being addressed in the poem isn’t just a light. They’re a “wild” light. It’s like a powerful and untamed light that the darkness can’t touch. 🙂
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Yes, exactly! The darkness might feel like it’s smothering you, but you’re the one keeping it at bay. 😊
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Absolutely! 🙂
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