“These moments
remind me
of you and
every moment
our lips touched.”
I feel the cold raindrops on my warm skin, lightning flashing in the sky and thunder crackling in the wind, sending a current through my senses. These moments remind me of you and every moment our lips touched.
© Sarah Doughty
melteeeeeeeeeeed again! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: Member of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Sarah Doughty/Heartstring Eulogies
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Soft, fluffy, romantic, beautiful.
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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What a beautiful little slice into the thoughts of someone (still?) in love. Thanks for sharing this poem.
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Yes, still. Thank you so much!
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I don’t know what sort of “mood” I’m floating in these days, but your words, well, they make a nest here. Love reading this, just perfect. Thanks, Sarah.
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Aww thank you!
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A beautiful love poem!
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Aw thanks! 😊 😊
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These moments come each day
And touches the skin as if the breeze of love
Lips get pale
Body trembles
How can they say it is memory
When my whole being feels these moments.
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Lovely! Thank young
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Reblogged this on Poetry, Fiction, Politics (PFP) and commented:
Maybe I’m an old softy (at 32), but I liked this.
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Such a delightful piece to read this morning, Sarah! I loved this: “cold raindrops on my warm skin.” I felt a little rush of excitement across my skin when I read that. From that point through the end, this piece really awakened my senses.
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That’s great! I was hoping that people would remember the sensation! 😊 😊
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So lovely! 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome! 😀
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I like your word imagery
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Thank you so much!
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