I like the last line, “Find yourself another route.” It really drives home the point, and even develops the meaning of the poem a little more. In the beginning, it could be someone being a pushover, letting people walk all over them, but the last line makes it more pointed. It’s one person in particular. Great job.
Sarah Doughty 
Oh man! So good! Love the comparison! ❤
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Thank you! 😊
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Such strong words from a weak and damaged surface. Love it.
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Thank you! 😊
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noone is truly alone well said!
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Thank you! 😊
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Great one
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Thank you! 😊
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The confidence towards the end is everything!
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Aww thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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You are most welcome!
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*Snaps in Z formation* Love this poem of sassiness!
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Ooh! Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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Hate those abrasive people, bring on the shine….
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Indeed. Thank you so much! 😊
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i especially love the imagery in “cracked in places … sealant and some shine.” brilliant imagery and metaphor of abuse all through.
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Thank you! I was hoping for that effect. 😊
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been away. nice poem to come back to
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I’m glad to see you’re back!
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thank you, Sarah!
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This is exactly how I feel today….love it! Thank you.
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It’s my pleasure to share. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Ooh I really like this!
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I’m honored! Thank you!
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You’re welcome! ❤️❤️❤️
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Brilliant!
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Aw thanks! 😊
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You’re welcome! 😊
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tis time for joy and some knowledge that your worth is up to you and precious to anyone with eyes , and ears.
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Yes, exactly! 😊 Thank you!
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be kind to yourself theresa
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Always.
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Yes!
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😊😊😊💖
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Love it! Love the new picture too! 🙂
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Thank you so much, my friend! 😊
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Thank you for this piece on the day I am only hours away from visiting my mom at her gravesite. Resonates with me powerfully.
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Aw, I feel you. 💖💖💖
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Love this!
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Aw thank you! 😊
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I like the last line, “Find yourself another route.” It really drives home the point, and even develops the meaning of the poem a little more. In the beginning, it could be someone being a pushover, letting people walk all over them, but the last line makes it more pointed. It’s one person in particular. Great job.
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Thank you so much! I was hoping to subtly lead people around and then set them straight at the end. 😊😊
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