Perfect! I love the way you’ve given a choice of words which leave the meaning of the poem open. Ironically too much of vagueness makes you seek for something in particular, and it’s wonderful thinking about it! 🙂
With these short poems, I try to give enough of a picture that readers cannot naturally fill in their own interpretations. Luckily not too many people have complained that my pieces are too vague, and they’re not able to discern the meaning or able to feel some sort of reaction to them. It’s not as easy as it might seem. 😊 Thank you for the kind words. 😊
Perfect. I love the way you’ve given a choice of words which leave the Haha! That sounds like an interesting perspective.
Well,there is a difference between the people who change themselves to attain stardom and the people who stay the way they are.
The people I mentioned above fake their real personality and try hard to obtain fame by not being themselves. Mainly because they don’t believe themselves. Even though they may attain their so called ‘stardom’, it won’t last long as it’s not even true.
Fortunately, I believe myself and I like being who I am. I also think motivation is necessary in one’s life. So, the stats page is is just a boost for my car and not the fuel itself.
Queen? Absolutely!
Drama? Not my cup of tea. 😏. Ironically, too much of vagueness makes you seek for something in particular, and it’s wonderful just thinking about it. 🙂
At one point or another, we all experience the thirst for something and the urge to quench it.
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Indeed. 😊 Thank you!
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Perfect! I love the way you’ve given a choice of words which leave the meaning of the poem open. Ironically too much of vagueness makes you seek for something in particular, and it’s wonderful thinking about it! 🙂
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With these short poems, I try to give enough of a picture that readers cannot naturally fill in their own interpretations. Luckily not too many people have complained that my pieces are too vague, and they’re not able to discern the meaning or able to feel some sort of reaction to them. It’s not as easy as it might seem. 😊 Thank you for the kind words. 😊
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Sry that was a bad typo.
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No worries. I was confused for a moment.
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Perfect. I love the way you’ve given a choice of words which leave the Haha! That sounds like an interesting perspective.
Well,there is a difference between the people who change themselves to attain stardom and the people who stay the way they are.
The people I mentioned above fake their real personality and try hard to obtain fame by not being themselves. Mainly because they don’t believe themselves. Even though they may attain their so called ‘stardom’, it won’t last long as it’s not even true.
Fortunately, I believe myself and I like being who I am. I also think motivation is necessary in one’s life. So, the stats page is is just a boost for my car and not the fuel itself.
Queen? Absolutely!
Drama? Not my cup of tea. 😏. Ironically, too much of vagueness makes you seek for something in particular, and it’s wonderful just thinking about it. 🙂
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You sparked my own Poem today, on the theme of “parched.” Evocative and heartfelt as always ^^
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Thank you for the compliment! 😊 I read your piece. It was vivid and raw, and now I want some ice water. 😊
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Lol thanks! (reaches for Pitcher ^^)
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🙂
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I like this. It’s like an alcoholic’s lament. 🙂
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In a way yes. I meant it as more of a sensual thing, but I leave them open for interpretation as best I can! 😊
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This could be the perfect description of greed. Nice one, Sarah.
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It is! Definitely! Thank you! 😊
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You’re most welcome.
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cheers!
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Ha, to you too. 😆
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Hopefully he’ll be satisfied!
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Haha, in my head, yes, but in reality, I’m incapable of acting on them.
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Ooh ok haha!
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😊😊 It’s the PTSD, unfortunately.
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Ah!
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Vampire much? LoL! Ah, great piece, Sarah! 🙂
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Haha, it was more of an innuendo than a vampire, but by all means, you know I like vampires too. 😆😆😊
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Whew! ❤ nicely done!
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Thank you, my friend! 😊
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Good evening🐞
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Thank you!
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We will never be satisfied, i suppose
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Indeed. Thank you as always! 😊 😊
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