Only through having meaningful conversations with each other, will you truly, know what one another’s about…and that, is what getting to know one another IS, not just focusing on the surfaces of things.
love the deliberate exclusion of the word ‘open’ before ‘book’. this helps to heighten the metaphor of braille – the lover has to go ‘blindly’ over the body, with no clue to the ways the body functions. nice one.
I like how it invites you to the story that is lingering in the shadows. Such an evocative piece.
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Thank you, Eric! I’m glad you think so! π π
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Only through having meaningful conversations with each other, will you truly, know what one another’s about…and that, is what getting to know one another IS, not just focusing on the surfaces of things.
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You’re right, that is always important. π
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Sensual and evocative. A great poem Sarah π
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Thank you, Davy! π
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Oh wow – fabulous!
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Thank you! π π π
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Just so beautiful; sensuous: my fingers are there…
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I’m glad you could place yourself there. ππ
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Amazing imagery there!
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Thank you! π π
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No problem!
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Amazing!
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Thanks, love! π π π
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You’re welcome!! π
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This is subtle sexiness and works perfectly. Solid. Solid writing, Sarah.
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Aw thanks! I’m glad you think so! π
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You’re very welcome.
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Reblogged this on La Petit Muse and commented:
Sarah is just too good with words that she messes with my emotions! β€
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Awww thanks, love!
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Most welcome! π
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Goosebumps alert! β€ β€
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I love this.
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Aw thanks! π π
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Words that can give me chills. A wonderfully visual piece.
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Aw thank you! π π π
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Brilliant
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Thank you! π
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My pleasure, always
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Oooh surprisingly sensual piece, I think. Loved the metaphorical use of Braille.
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Yes it was a metaphor of touch. ππ Thanks, love!
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love the deliberate exclusion of the word ‘open’ before ‘book’. this helps to heighten the metaphor of braille – the lover has to go ‘blindly’ over the body, with no clue to the ways the body functions. nice one.
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Yes, exactly! It was a sensation deprivation type thing where only touch was involved. πππ
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i got that. like the imageries it connotes.
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Ab.so.lu.te.ly stunning! Severe case of chills at first sight π
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Aww thank you! π π π
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