Wow! So powerful and haunting at the same time. It makes one look at their own shadows and examine what makes up their screams. A truly remarkable wordsmith you are.
For me that translates as something I once called my silent scream. When I read the line “I’m the one that hears them” my mind changes it to “I’m the [only] one [who] hears them.” That’s when the full impact of the “aloneness” strikes me.
Sarah Doughty 
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Deep, dark and delicious. Nice.
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Thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome. 🙃
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Wow! So powerful and haunting at the same time. It makes one look at their own shadows and examine what makes up their screams. A truly remarkable wordsmith you are.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Such powerful imagery there!
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Thank you so much!
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Your welcome!
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Incredible!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Hi,
Very power and strong words, reminds me of having an internal battle.
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Yes, it’s definitely a lonely battle.
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Perhaps not just you. Marvelous piece of art by the way
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Always a pleasure
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For me that translates as something I once called my silent scream. When I read the line “I’m the one that hears them” my mind changes it to “I’m the [only] one [who] hears them.” That’s when the full impact of the “aloneness” strikes me.
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Yes, that was exactly what I was going for, without filling in so many blanks. I’m glad you were able to feel the true meaning behind this piece.
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Powerful
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Thank you!
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This has a creepy yet knowing feel to it. *goose pimples*
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Ah, thanks, love. 💖
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My pleasure, Sarah. 😊
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Very evocative!
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Thank you!
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Most welcome dear Sarah.
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