Oh, that is heart-wrenching! Hearing those words from a love one must feel like the world came crashing down on you. Hearing such hopelessness and futility in such simple words, bringing so much pain at the thought of a miserable ending.
Damn that’s quite the thought.
I wonder if that’s what’s thought of me. I’ve given up of dreams and living a life that there’s nothing to fight for.
It’s a wonderfully thought provoking piece.
I think this one deserves an award because it can be interpreted in an infinite number of ways, none of which will really satisfy. It’s like “Life” one day saying, I’ll make me a universe… then sitting down and thinking on which one of the infinite ways to proceed in putting that thought to work.
True. Sadly, so. Sometimes the best fight we can give is by just ‘breathing’, hanging on there and not throwing in the towel despite the punches life throws at us.
Speaking as a person who fights for people: you fight as long as you are able, hoping that they will fight to get to you too, because that is neccesary too. If they won’t or can’t, at some point, despite desire and love, you lose the will to fight. It can’t be maintained forever. But it is, infinitely, sad when it happens.
Sarah Doughty 
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A Sarah Doughty poem
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Oh, that is heart-wrenching! Hearing those words from a love one must feel like the world came crashing down on you. Hearing such hopelessness and futility in such simple words, bringing so much pain at the thought of a miserable ending.
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Thank you so much. I’m honored!
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Oh wow, that was a sad one, but I love it. Happy or sad your words bring magic to the day 🙂
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Oh wow!!! This was powerful.
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Thank you! 😊
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Beautiful stuff!
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Aw thanks! 😊 😊
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No problem!
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Damn that’s quite the thought.
I wonder if that’s what’s thought of me. I’ve given up of dreams and living a life that there’s nothing to fight for.
It’s a wonderfully thought provoking piece.
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Ah, but you haven’t given up your life. There’s a difference from altering or changing your life’s goals and losing all desire to live.
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I suppose you’re right. just depends what sort of mood I’m in.
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True.
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There was nothing left to fight for… Such sad words. So defeated and resigned. It’s the words of letting go. 😦
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It is. Thank you, love
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You’re totally welcome. 🙂
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I think this one deserves an award because it can be interpreted in an infinite number of ways, none of which will really satisfy. It’s like “Life” one day saying, I’ll make me a universe… then sitting down and thinking on which one of the infinite ways to proceed in putting that thought to work.
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Oh wow. That means a lot coming from you. I really enjoyed this piece for that very reason. It can be applied to so many areas and events. 😊
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Oh Sarah. I get this and it touched me. Most of what you write does.
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That’s so kind of you to say. Thank you! 😊
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Wherever there’s life, there’s a chance. I love this one, Sarah.
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Thank you, love! I couldn’t agree more. 😊 😊
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You are so very welcome, Sarah.
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Out of lov,
darling!
chris
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Thanks
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Kindedly Welcome…
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True. Sadly, so. Sometimes the best fight we can give is by just ‘breathing’, hanging on there and not throwing in the towel despite the punches life throws at us.
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Yes, exactly! We can’t always rely on someone else to fight our battles for us. 😊
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sad; wet eyes!
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Aw thanks, Holly! 😊
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Speaking as a person who fights for people: you fight as long as you are able, hoping that they will fight to get to you too, because that is neccesary too. If they won’t or can’t, at some point, despite desire and love, you lose the will to fight. It can’t be maintained forever. But it is, infinitely, sad when it happens.
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Yes that’s definitely true. Thank you, as always. 😊
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Deep!!!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Welcome 😊😊😊
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Hmph!😕
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Thanks, love.
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😊
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aww…
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Thank you.
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you’re welcome
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Oh dear, that’s so sad. My Saturday’s first teardrop.
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Aww thank you. That’s a high compliment. 😊
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