Whenever I click on one of your posts I already know..
that my mind is going to be blown away! 🙂
Thanks for always writing something so beautiful and moving!
I’ll say it can be interpreted in many POVs but one thing will remain the same that this piece talks about feeling someone else’s pain to the fullest.
In my case I read it from a brokenhearted girl’s perspective who has been abandoned by everyone.
Oooh, I liked this 🙂 I think can be interpreted many different ways according to everyone’s different situations. Beautiful writing as always, Sarah. 😀
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! I like to let readers fill in the blanks, whenever possible. It’s always nice to hear what people think! 😊
Ooo I like this! It shows that no one’s perfect, that we all have some darkness within our hearts, and that there’s hopefully someone out there who’ll accept us for what we are regardless.
So this comment ended up in my spam. I have no idea why. Thank you so much for the kind words. Unfortunately I believe you’re right. I think in many ways we wouldn’t be so interesting without a little darkness breaking the monotony. 😊
Oh WP always puts me in the spam folder 😛 Not sure if it’s some sort of glitch but I know other bloggers have the same issue. I can go weeks without my comments finding their way into the spam folder, but other times my comments can be sent there every day for a solid week 😦
Exactly! We all need a little bit of darkness. I think everything needs to exist in balance. You can’t have light without dark and vice versa 🙂
Thank you, I would appreciate that 🙂 I did try to contact WP when it first started happening, but nothing really came of it. I now just hope people check their spam often 😛
Aah, hell… It sounds like a dare, an incredible dare. This is perfect, Sarah.
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Thank you, love! It was a bit of a dare. 😊
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You’re most welcome. Ha! It reads like one!
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Thank you! 😊
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It’s my pleasure, Sarah. 🙂
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Bravo… I know the place… been there “oblivion” sad 😦
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Ah, I’m sorry you’re familiar with the feeling. No one deserves that.
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Woah that’s dark! Nice work!
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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No problem!!
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Wow! I am rendered near speechless. That final line gave me pleasant chills and fed my old goth self 😉 excellent writing indeed!
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Ah! Thank you! I think a little darkness should be in everyone. It makes us more complex. 😊
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Oh yes, I totally agree 🙂
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Excellent.
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Thank you! 😊
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Another great poem Sarah. After reading this it left me feeling like I had been inside a washing machine on full spin.
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Ooooh, I like that! Thank you for sharing it with me. It’s always interesting to see what people interpret. 😊
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Whenever I click on one of your posts I already know..
that my mind is going to be blown away! 🙂
Thanks for always writing something so beautiful and moving!
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Aww that’s such an amazing compliment! Thank you so much for that! How did you interpret this piece? 😊
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I’ll say it can be interpreted in many POVs but one thing will remain the same that this piece talks about feeling someone else’s pain to the fullest.
In my case I read it from a brokenhearted girl’s perspective who has been abandoned by everyone.
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Ah, yes. That’s a very good interpretation. Sometimes these kinds of pieces are too dark, but, in the end, it is a part of life.
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For someone who has seen the realities of life so early in life.. nothing is too dark.. its just the truth.. and truth can be disturbing at times.
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That’s definitely true. Thank you for your thoughts.
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Oooh, I liked this 🙂 I think can be interpreted many different ways according to everyone’s different situations. Beautiful writing as always, Sarah. 😀
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Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! I like to let readers fill in the blanks, whenever possible. It’s always nice to hear what people think! 😊
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That’s true, some things need to be explained to a reader and other times it is best left to the readers imagination. 🙂
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I completely agree. The key is figuring out the difference, which one should be left open, and which should have a full explanation. 😊
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oh woooow. that last line!!!
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊
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Ooo I like this! It shows that no one’s perfect, that we all have some darkness within our hearts, and that there’s hopefully someone out there who’ll accept us for what we are regardless.
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So this comment ended up in my spam. I have no idea why. Thank you so much for the kind words. Unfortunately I believe you’re right. I think in many ways we wouldn’t be so interesting without a little darkness breaking the monotony. 😊
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Oh WP always puts me in the spam folder 😛 Not sure if it’s some sort of glitch but I know other bloggers have the same issue. I can go weeks without my comments finding their way into the spam folder, but other times my comments can be sent there every day for a solid week 😦
Exactly! We all need a little bit of darkness. I think everything needs to exist in balance. You can’t have light without dark and vice versa 🙂
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Yes, exactly! I’ll keep an eye out. I’m just not sure why it chose that one comment to go to spam, it’s not like you were sent there every time. Odd.
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Thank you, I would appreciate that 🙂 I did try to contact WP when it first started happening, but nothing really came of it. I now just hope people check their spam often 😛
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I’m beginning to see I need to do this every few days. 😆😆
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Oooo… I like that depth of dark sentiment. Well said.
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Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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Amazing! Got writer’s envy over here! 😜
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Aww. Thank you for the lovely compliment! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Thoughts from this practicing drug addict,
hello darling,
i miss you!
i also lov picking on you..
https://crjen1958.wordpress.com/2017/02/06/breathe/
hugs & kisses chris
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Love these lines… very sensual
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Aw thank you!
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Omg 😲 great
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Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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Most welcome dear Sarah.
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Damn, I love this.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Generally, the touch of another darkness, I find enlightening and under the right circumstances, delicious.
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You’re a rare breed, my friend. 😊 Thank you!
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