Take this darkness
within my heart
and bathe in it.
Then tell me
how it feels to
touch hell’s oblivion.

Β© Sarah Doughty


50 thoughts on “Touch”

      1. I’ll say it can be interpreted in many POVs but one thing will remain the same that this piece talks about feeling someone else’s pain to the fullest.
        In my case I read it from a brokenhearted girl’s perspective who has been abandoned by everyone.

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  1. Ooo I like this! It shows that no one’s perfect, that we all have some darkness within our hearts, and that there’s hopefully someone out there who’ll accept us for what we are regardless.

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    1. So this comment ended up in my spam. I have no idea why. Thank you so much for the kind words. Unfortunately I believe you’re right. I think in many ways we wouldn’t be so interesting without a little darkness breaking the monotony. 😊

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      1. Oh WP always puts me in the spam folder πŸ˜› Not sure if it’s some sort of glitch but I know other bloggers have the same issue. I can go weeks without my comments finding their way into the spam folder, but other times my comments can be sent there every day for a solid week 😦

        Exactly! We all need a little bit of darkness. I think everything needs to exist in balance. You can’t have light without dark and vice versa πŸ™‚

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      2. Thank you, I would appreciate that πŸ™‚ I did try to contact WP when it first started happening, but nothing really came of it. I now just hope people check their spam often πŸ˜›

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