Blessings Poetry I whispered your name on the brittle wind, and I wonder, darling, did you hear me? © Sarah Doughty Share this:EmailFacebookLinkedInPinterestPocketPrintRedditTumblrTwitterLike Loading... Related
Though I wait upon the whispering breeze, the empty brush of wind fail my heart to ease. LikeLiked by 1 person
It doesn’t always offer solace. But I’d like to think it’s a gentle reminder that you aren’t alone. LikeLiked by 1 person
Very poignant! I like the feel of eternally waiting for a response that may never come. LikeLiked by 1 person
Sad indeed; but in a nice way, rather than a straight-up nasty rejection sort of way. It leaves open possibility, and hope. LikeLiked by 1 person
I heard your whisper On the back of a breeze, I will always hear you, my darling Across the seven seas. Your words were so beautiful and melodic today, I couldn’t help but be inspired, my dear Sarah ❤ LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the lyrical quality to this one. It makes me think of an old Dolly Parton song for some reason. Just beautiful. LikeLiked by 1 person
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Awww thank you! 😊
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So simple, yet packs such a message. Love your work to bits
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Aww thank you! I’m honored! 😊
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Though I wait upon the whispering breeze, the empty brush of wind fail my heart to ease.
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It doesn’t always offer solace. But I’d like to think it’s a gentle reminder that you aren’t alone.
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Very poignant! I like the feel of eternally waiting for a response that may never come.
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Ah, yes. In a way, though, it is kind of sad.
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Sad indeed; but in a nice way, rather than a straight-up nasty rejection sort of way. It leaves open possibility, and hope.
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That’s very true. Hope is what drives us.
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Nice Sarah.
Some elegant suggestion in this.
Cheers,
Frank
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Thank you so much, Frank! 😊
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You’re welcome. It works well.
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😊😊
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you!
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Amazing!
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Thank you!
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I heard your whisper
On the back of a breeze,
I will always hear you, my darling
Across the seven seas.
Your words were so beautiful and melodic today, I couldn’t help but be inspired, my dear Sarah ❤
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Aww thank you! 😊 I wanted it to sound lyrical, because most blessings are. 😊
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“brittle wind”–I feel it!
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Aw thanks! 😊 😊
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I love the lyrical quality to this one. It makes me think of an old Dolly Parton song for some reason. Just beautiful.
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Aww thanks, love! 😊
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You’re welcome! 😀
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I love your writing! It flows and is so easy to read.
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Aww thank you! 😊 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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I love this! Most excellent. Did I say yet that I really like it? ☺
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Thank you, I believe you did. 😊😊
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