Quakes Poetry The staggering weight upon my shoulders causes my foundation to tremble and I await for it to crumble. © Sarah Doughty Share this:EmailFacebookLinkedInPinterestPocketPrintRedditTumblrTwitterLike Loading... Related
I liked this poem because the feeling was very real to me. It makes me think of anxious nights at 2 a.m. when I can’t sleep and every problem seems overwhelming. LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh man. I completely understand how you feel. I deal with that nightly. I’m sorry that you endure it too. LikeLike
The reflection of emotions and earthquakes works so incredibly well when we think of a physical representation of our inner emotions. ! LikeLiked by 1 person
This one resonates with me profoundly. Well told.
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Oh, thank you so much! 😊
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My pleasure.
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You are a great poet!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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The weight of the words squeeze down upon me.
Well done.
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Ooh, thank you!
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What heavy burdens we mortals bear
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Indeed.
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🙂
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the tension is vividly felt love. ❤
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Aw thanks! 😊
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Yay!! Always, love! How are you? 🙂 I hope you are great!
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I’m alright. 😊😊💖
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Yay! 🙂
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I know exactly what you mean! Thank you for sharing it.
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Always. Thank you for reading!
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Awesome!
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Thanks! 😊
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You’re welcome!
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I liked this poem because the feeling was very real to me. It makes me think of anxious nights at 2 a.m. when I can’t sleep and every problem seems overwhelming.
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Oh man. I completely understand how you feel. I deal with that nightly. I’m sorry that you endure it too.
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Amazing imagery on how emotions break people. Great work!
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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No problem!
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Oh yes… like Atlas… but with quakes. I love it.
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Oh yes! Definitely!
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The reflection of emotions and earthquakes works so incredibly well when we think of a physical representation of our inner emotions. !
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Ah, thank you, dearest! I was hoping it would be viewed that way. 😊
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