Agreed….. It is because of that type of mind I guess many of us still are going on. … Even hurt and pain offered by the ones we loved have not broken us fully and even the beautiful life turned Bitch could not make us fall down.
It made me cry as well. So sad. It was so horrible, he couldn’t wait another year. By then I’m thinking he believed that his mind was changed irrevocably.
Rational and creative at the same time. While I see an oxymoron in the making, I also understand the art vs. food argument. There should be a third component in that equation for courage.
Courage. To make the sacrifices or choices or find a way. William Blake comes to mind. There’s an old saying among artists along the art…or food question. The reply is “Show me the Monet.” Brilliant, but hungry.
An excellent poem Sarah and one made more poignant by adding your narrative around Alan Turing and your motivation to write this piece. I think there is a drive, through advertising and social media, to make us mindless and fall into and follow the wealth and celebrity culture. Poems like this remind us to stay mindful, create, and challenge the status quo.
Now that poem opens up some interesting issues. Beginning as it does with the self asserted certainty of a social agreement it suggests a speculation as the consequences of the loss of two sides of mental faculty and then it suggests that that loss would be worse than the unknowable state of physical non existence. Which reminds me that the mind is more important than the body at the same time it is only the body that permits a mind to operate. I feel an undertone of bitterness because you used the word intellectual. I guess this poem speaks of experience but the the thing is it doesn’t take an intellectual to agree, it is unimaginable to me that a human would not value their mind , even the unthinking suffer (and their families) when the light is obscured and their words no longer connect with productive communicative society. I wonder if this poem is directed at someone? In any event it is brave. Very brave, almost as brave as the person who wrote it.
Wow, I didn’t expect such kind words. First of all, it wasn’t directed at anyone in particular. It came as a result of watching The Imitation Game, where it explores the invention of the first computer. It was based on true events, and unfortunately the man that invented it, Alan Turing, a gay man, was forced by court to take hormone therapy to chemically castrate him. One year into his two year sentence, he couldn’t take it any longer. His brilliant mind was taken from him and he lost all desire to continue on. The kinds of people that value their minds on that kind of level would be equally as devastated as Turing.
Agreed….. It is because of that type of mind I guess many of us still are going on. … Even hurt and pain offered by the ones we loved have not broken us fully and even the beautiful life turned Bitch could not make us fall down.
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Lol yes.
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Gorgeousness! And so true, if I couldn’t be creative I don’t know how I’d live. Thanks for visiting Bookwise, you really made my day! ❤
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Aw you’re welcome. It was my pleasure. Thank you for stopping by! 😊
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*shudders* That’d be nightmarish. And inspired by The Imitation Game too! That ending made me weep.
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It made me cry as well. So sad. It was so horrible, he couldn’t wait another year. By then I’m thinking he believed that his mind was changed irrevocably.
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Yes, that’s a fair point. Well, at least the film made a difference to his legacy, if not his life. Or so I hope.
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I hope so too.
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I think it would be..
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Thank you. 😊
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I’m always unhappiest when I don’t have an outlet for creativity and thought.
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Me too. 💕
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Rational and creative at the same time. While I see an oxymoron in the making, I also understand the art vs. food argument. There should be a third component in that equation for courage.
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Art vs. Food? And what’s the third component? Thank you, as always, for reading and commenting.
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Courage. To make the sacrifices or choices or find a way. William Blake comes to mind. There’s an old saying among artists along the art…or food question. The reply is “Show me the Monet.” Brilliant, but hungry.
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Oh yes. I understand now. Thank you! 😊
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An excellent poem Sarah and one made more poignant by adding your narrative around Alan Turing and your motivation to write this piece. I think there is a drive, through advertising and social media, to make us mindless and fall into and follow the wealth and celebrity culture. Poems like this remind us to stay mindful, create, and challenge the status quo.
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Yes, exactly! Turing was brave enough to stand against the people that opposed his invention, and it paid off. We have to be brave to do the same.
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Amen.
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Thank you!
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It certainly would be love
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Thanks, love. 💖
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Now that poem opens up some interesting issues. Beginning as it does with the self asserted certainty of a social agreement it suggests a speculation as the consequences of the loss of two sides of mental faculty and then it suggests that that loss would be worse than the unknowable state of physical non existence. Which reminds me that the mind is more important than the body at the same time it is only the body that permits a mind to operate. I feel an undertone of bitterness because you used the word intellectual. I guess this poem speaks of experience but the the thing is it doesn’t take an intellectual to agree, it is unimaginable to me that a human would not value their mind , even the unthinking suffer (and their families) when the light is obscured and their words no longer connect with productive communicative society. I wonder if this poem is directed at someone? In any event it is brave. Very brave, almost as brave as the person who wrote it.
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Wow, I didn’t expect such kind words. First of all, it wasn’t directed at anyone in particular. It came as a result of watching The Imitation Game, where it explores the invention of the first computer. It was based on true events, and unfortunately the man that invented it, Alan Turing, a gay man, was forced by court to take hormone therapy to chemically castrate him. One year into his two year sentence, he couldn’t take it any longer. His brilliant mind was taken from him and he lost all desire to continue on. The kinds of people that value their minds on that kind of level would be equally as devastated as Turing.
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Thankyou for the background. You illuminate things. Thank you.
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You’re very welcome. 😊
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Very true. The Orwellian Prophecy of “1984” is dawning. Conformity is the new norm.
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Unfortunately, that’s true. But I think as long as the creatives and intellectuals continue on, maybe not so many will succumb to that mindset.
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Yes, it would be!
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Thanks, love.
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Oh, yes!
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So true. 😦
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Thank you, love. 💖
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You’re welcome! 😀
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Yes
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