Oh Sarah! How timely to read this and your other post on ‘Timeliness’.
And how I’ve been feeling over this period – altering your words, this is what it felt like:
Even though you leaned in and held me tight,
I still knew you would never be truly mine.
It is. To be honest, I think she did. A little time with this person would have been worth the pain to her. But, I do like to leave things open to interpretation, so that people can decide for themselves how they see it. 😊 Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Even after I was on my knee
Opened my heart for you
Expressed my feelings for you
Forwarded my hand to you
Don’t know what went wrong
Can’t say why you changed heart
Took just you a moment
Turned your back
And you said goodbye….
Leaving me with tears….
It is okay… Not your fault… Some memories stay stuck deep in heart.. Maybe love has a defination I don’t know… Maybe I don’t know how to love… Maybe I deserve no love
Sarah Doughty 
Words! 😥
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Sigh, yes. Thank you.
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Wow..
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Aw thanks! 😊
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The heart is also a vault. Often locked with a key of self imposed restraint.
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Yes, it is.
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Oh Sarah! How timely to read this and your other post on ‘Timeliness’.
And how I’ve been feeling over this period – altering your words, this is what it felt like:
Even though you leaned in and held me tight,
I still knew you would never be truly mine.
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Awww. It has much the same feeling. I’m sorry if times are bad for you.
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I love how your words punch the air and demand to be felt
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Oooh I like that! Thank you!
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Hook, line, and sinker.
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Haha, yes. 😆
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Haha! Do the darn thing, Sarah. 😊
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Done already. 😆😆
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Yes, it is! Ha! Boom!
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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wow, thats a rather ironic caption i reckon
thanks a bunch for dropping by my blog and good luck for your own
Cheers mate
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You’re welcome. 😊
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Such a heartbreaking story told in so few words. Well written.
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Aww thank you!
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This is just heartbreaking, gah.
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It is. 💕
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Intriguing, yet so sad.
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It is. Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome! 😀
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Beautiful take on marriage there
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Thank you so much!
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No problem!
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wow. This is profoundly sad and so damned true all at the same time. No one truly belongs to anyone.
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Exactly. Thanks, love.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Sad. Did she say yes?
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It is. To be honest, I think she did. A little time with this person would have been worth the pain to her. But, I do like to leave things open to interpretation, so that people can decide for themselves how they see it. 😊 Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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I like the open-endedness, too. It’s always more fun to speculate than to have a definitive here’s what happened. 🙂
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Yes, exactly! 😊
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Even after I was on my knee
Opened my heart for you
Expressed my feelings for you
Forwarded my hand to you
Don’t know what went wrong
Can’t say why you changed heart
Took just you a moment
Turned your back
And you said goodbye….
Leaving me with tears….
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I’m sorry to bring up those feelings for you.
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It is okay… Not your fault… Some memories stay stuck deep in heart.. Maybe love has a defination I don’t know… Maybe I don’t know how to love… Maybe I deserve no love
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No one deserves to be without love.
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Well some do, Sarah…. Maybe I am that special person
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I doubt it.
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Well so far the story is that… The one who means everything and said I am everything is going far…
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I’m sorry.
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It is okay 😊
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i love the use of past tense in this piece – if she knew, why did she agree. brilliant one.
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Yes exactly!
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Thought provoking!
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Thank you so much!
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