love this. is this some kind of dream spell – i mean, she knows she is present in another person’s dream. if it isn’t a dream spell, she must be some hell of a confident person to believe she has such strong hold on the person’s subconscious. but then again, if she is so confident, why only want to exist (permanently) in his subconscious. nice.
Sarah Doughty 
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You are deep in me
Awaked as I sleep
Each moment of our beings
Is all over me again
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Lovely!
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Trying to sleep 😂
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😆
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love this. is this some kind of dream spell – i mean, she knows she is present in another person’s dream. if it isn’t a dream spell, she must be some hell of a confident person to believe she has such strong hold on the person’s subconscious. but then again, if she is so confident, why only want to exist (permanently) in his subconscious. nice.
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You’re exactly right! April and Ian inspired this piece. 😊😊
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nice
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😊😊😊
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Excellent Sarah. There is a feel of two minds drifting into eternity in this beautiful poem.
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Awww thank you so much! That’s the feeling I was hoping for. 😊
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I love that first line. It makes me want to take it apart and figure it out. 😆
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Right? I love that about this piece.
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It’s just so intriguing. 😀 Love it!
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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An impossible intimacy, irresistible as a self made trap
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Awesome.
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Aw! Thank you!
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Short, sweet, and philosophical. Great work!
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Thank you!
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No problem!
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So you are the one keeping me awake? snicker. really lovely, gotta say!
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Hahaha, whoops.
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Such a lovely poem 🙂 x
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Ah, thank you! 😊
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Oh, I do love this! Fabulous!!
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You’re welcome.
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Oooh ❤ ❤
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Lovely as always
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Thank you!
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Yes… in dreams ♥
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Awww. 💕
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I wish I had written this. Then I could use it to flirt without citing the source. So good.
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Ha, thank you!
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