In the moon’s shadow,
I search for your silhouette
in the cold darkness
so we can watch the world
go up in flames together.
© Sarah Doughty
For the #NovemberNotes challenge.
Hosted by myself and Rosema of A Reading Writer.
Today’s song is Up In Flames by Ruelle.
wow
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sweet. sweet. sweeet! 😀
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Aw thanks!
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always love! ❤
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I love it! Especially the last line. ❤
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Aw, thank you! 😊 😊
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This has been some nice poetry for the November challenge.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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very naughty. the australian and californian police forces won’t find the idea of watching the world ‘go up in flames’ funny. but when two lovers come together and set their world aflame – magic. nice.
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Ha, thank you. 😊😊😊
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my pleasure!
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Brilliant Sarah. There is a great sense of love and darkness in those last two lines.
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Yey…. you are finally on my reader….
Beautiful take Sara..
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Gorgeous and succinctly told❤️️
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Thank you!
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I really like this one. I imagine that it’s a villain’s lover waiting for him to show up. And for some reason, I imagine her standing on top of a hill overlooking a city. 🙂
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Aw yes. That’s kind of what I had in mind. 😆😆😆💖
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Awesome! 😀 😀
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Brilliant poem, especially on the last line! Excellent
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Not a problem!
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Love this. That last line is rather chilling.
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Oh wow, thank you!
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This is so beautifully descriptive I can actually form a picture in my mind!😊
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Here you are, hiding in my spam. Grrr. Thanks, love.
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😕😔😥
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Another beautiful piece… Bravo!!
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Aw, thanks! 😊
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Love it.
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Thanks! 😊
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Welcome 🙂
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WoW!!! brilliant………… 🙂 🙂
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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my pleasure!!! 🙂 🙂
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