All those times I tried to hide my pain, you still knew the droplets on my face weren’t from the rain. You knew me better than anyone and you showed me that I could trust that you’d always be there, so I built my walls around you, keeping you in with me so I wouldn’t be so alone.
I embraced the pain as you held me. Even if you never know, your arms keep me whole. When you feel the beat of my heart against your skin, know that it beats for you and all you’ve done. You helped me turn my pain into something beautiful.
© Sarah Doughty
For the #NovemberNotes challenge.
Hosted by myself and Rosema of A Reading Writer.
Today’s song is Pain Told Love by Tribe Society.
Reblogged this on Broke And Millennial and commented:
Nothing is as beautiful as love. 🙂
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Aww thank you!
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Bookmarked your fantastic website. Amazing work, unique way with words!
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Thank you! 😊
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Reblogged this on Still Another Photoblog.
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This is very sweet. I’m enjoying reading your pieces 🙂 good stuff
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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“You helped me turn my pain into something beautiful.” — this what we all strive for! Bravo!
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I’m happy you’re enjoying these! Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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A wonderful and uplifting poem Sarah. Pain can sometimes be turned into something much different.
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Yes, definitely. You just have to have enough resolve to do it. 😊
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Wow! This post is truly beautiful and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it so much
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Thank you! I’m honored! 😊
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These are the posts that I miss so terribly. Amazing write my dear friend. Hope you and yours are well.
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We are. I hope you are too, Chimp! I’ve missed you!
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Very moving and beautiful.
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Aww thank you!
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Most welcome!
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there are three things that brings you happiness. one of them is finding the one who can tell the difference between the ‘droplets of rain’ and the tears of pain on your face. brilliant post.
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Awww thank you. 😊
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you welcome!
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such a gripping and emotion packed read love. sooo good. ❤
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Thank you! 😊 💖
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Oh, wow wow wow. Love this take on building walls around someone. Just the two of you in that isolated space…it speaks volumes. This was immensely moving, Sarah! As to be expected with your work.
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Thank you, love! 😊 😊
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It is impossible to create anything from pain , with out at least one person holding you…..
This is so powerfully conveyed here ! Love it. Brilliant, walls around us both…..not one , makes all the difference
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Definitely! I couldn’t have done any of this without my husband. 😊
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Love this, plus the discussion here in the comments. It’s got me thinking about my own clearance levels!
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Oh yes! It’s an interesting topic when you think about it. 😊
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So excellent!
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Something VERY beautiful 🙂 ❤
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Aw thank you! 😊
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So beautiful Sarah! Allowing someone their pain and holding space for them is true love. Masterful.
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So true. Thank you so much!
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This is lovely. ☺️
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A very moving poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! I’m honored. 😊
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You are welcome.
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So beautiful, and heartbreaking. It’s dangerous to build your walls around someone else, I know, but more dangerous than keeping everyone out? I’m not sure.
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I think there’s certain layers of protection. It just depends on the ‘level of clearance’ a person might have. My husband is about as close and one could get to the center, and there are a few more people at various distances outward, and then there’s everyone else outside. It takes a certain amount of bravery to allow yourself to be open like that, but it’s a lot less painful than being alone.
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I’m generally very open with my friends, even new friends, so I guess I have a pretty “low clearance”. But the last person I invited inside that last inner wall stayed there for twelve years and then did a monstrous amount damage breaking his way back out again. That was several years ago, and I still think that experience was more painful than it is to be alone (which isn’t that bad, really). I’m finally feeling open to letting someone else get that close again, but boy, he’s really going to have to be worth the risk.
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I completely understand. To have someone break out would be heartbreaking. But I’m glad that you’re finally finding the courage to try again.
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Thanks. It’s been harder than I thought it would be. But maybe I’m just about to meet the right person, who knows!
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Always stay positive! 😊
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