Photo credit @rusticbones.
You read my thoughts through my eyes and felt my fear, the overwhelming amount of guilt, and sadness, but you still saw the light, glimmering against all that darkness like the stars in the night sky, and you promised me, “Tomorrow will be another day.”
© Sarah Doughty
For the #NovemberNotes challenge.
Hosted by myself and Rosema of A Reading Writer.
Today’s song is Shell Suite by Chad Valley.
Sarah Doughty 
Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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it’s a lovely thought. we all need someone like this.
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We sure do. Thanks! 😊
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A wonderful and hopeful glimmer of light to start the week. Thank you Sarah 🙂
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Grrrr…. dang keyboard! I meant I like the feeling of hope in that last line 🙂
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I figured that’s what you meant. 😊
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“Tomorrow will be another day.”…. Not a better day, not worse either. I like the
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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I love the word “glimmering.” It has such a lovely sound. This is a beautiful write filled with such promise for the narrator. This “you” sounds like a keeper. What aisle can I find him in? 😉
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Hahaha, I wish I knew. 😊
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So do all writers eh?
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Yes
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😊
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such a wonderful opener for my week my love. your words are lights. ❤
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Aw thanks! 😊
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You are as much a light. 🙂 I’m paranoid you’re not getting updates and I’d love you to read this: https://theescritorium.wordpress.com/2016/11/13/poetry-65/
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I didn’t see it. My reader has been wonky for a while now. I saw, liked and commented. Thank you for letting me know I missed it. I apologize that I did.
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It isn’t your fault. I can’t believe there’s not a way to fix it.
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All I can do is wait for them to update, yet again, and hope it’s fixed.
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A very good poem.
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Aw thank you! 😊
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“…but you still saw the light, glimmering against all that darkness like the stars in the night sky,” I love this line. it’s like even though she has all of this emotional baggage, he’s able to see the beautiful light shining inside of her. Just lovely. 🙂
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Yes. Sigh. I remember those days when I felt like that with my husband (then almost boyfriend). 😊
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Aww. This one feels like a big warm hug (I know that sounds cheesy, but that’s just the feeling I got from it.) 😀
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That’s exactly what it was meant to do. Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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You’re welcome! 😀
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