If you’re
not the one, then
why does my spirit
fit with yours
like we were molded
as two parts
of a whole?
© Sarah Doughty
For the #MondayMorningMelts prompts, hosted by the lovely
Rosema of A Reading Writer and Jade of Jade M. Wong.
Today’s song prompt is If You’re Not The One by Daniel Bedingfield.
xo
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Fantastic.
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Aw thanks!
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This question is so what I feel about someone right now.
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Aw, I’m sorry to hear that. I hope you find your answer. And hopefully a happy outcome.
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Thank you. Life is a magic eight ball sometimes. It gives the response ‘Reply Hazy, Try Again’ and you have to shake it up.
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I understand.
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🙂
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Oooh… I love this so much. ♥
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Aw thanks, love!
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A mystery behind a mystery
This Soul knows the other
The other still in body
Doesn’t realize its part
I feel you are mine.
You don’t have feelings even
I see we complete
You enjoy been one
I am further on journey
You lacking behind
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Ooooh, very nice!
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It does….. It just is a journey…. Vibes attracted but didn’t stay together
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The wants were same
I was the want
She was my want
I was what I wanted
She still was confused
Confusion lead
To separation
This Soul knows it is her part
The journey now Alone to cover
Starting to love self.
Becoming whole
Making self priority
Trusting Source.
Full of gratitude
For whatever happens
Becoming one
No more worried of the other half
When vibes with align
A Soul will appear
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Aw that’s lovely and sad.
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Sad is my thought
As was happiness
If she was reason of happiness
How can she is reason of sadness
It is my expectations failed
As her expectations I didn’t meet
Now why then I be sad
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Maybe she wasn’t meant to be yours. Maybe someone else is out there for you.
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love is love
it knows to give
it gave
she refused
love stays
it still flowers
ready to blossom
in another garden
watering it
so that it
spreads fragrance
a bee will attract
is what nature knows
flower still flowers
love as it is
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True.
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well gave as much as I could…..
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That’s all we can do.
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indeeeeed a morning melt, love! aaaah! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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always, love. ❤ ❤ ❤
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the reality is, this question is usually asked on the way out – when things are not working in a relationship. a trick post. a brilliant trick post.
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You got me. 😊 😊 😊
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always.
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Looks like a real life experience Rose lol..needless to say this is a brilliant take on the prompt…
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I’m sure it has happened to someone, somewhere.
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I agree with you…😊
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😊 😊
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Your poem ends with an heart-melting question 🙂 ❤ I haven't had time to write a reponse by my gut reaction to this prompt was "if I'f not the one, then who am I?" Clearly I am not romantic!
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It does, often these types of relationships are ended without answers. Thanks, love.
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I am in this boat.
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Aw, I’m sorry to hear that. Sending good vibes your way.
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Purrfect!
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😍😍😍
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Oof, this is so beautiful ❤
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Oh my, thank you, love. 😊 😊 😊
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Sarah, this… this truly resonates.
I have no words for this, it is too powerful for me to even attempt to try and suit it with words.
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Oh my, thank you, love. 😊
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You’re so welcome!
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A very good question.
Funny how sometimes you meet someone too late huh?
Or things just didn’t quite sync up at the right time?
Love and emotion are complicated and tricky things.
Love the poem. 🙂
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Exactly.
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And thank you! 😊
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I think my heart just melted a little.🤗
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Awwwwww. 😊😊😊😊
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the central metaphor works well. (i can imagine the person to whom the poem is addressed would have a really tough time answering the question!)
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Thank you! 😊
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Why, indeed… Love your writing 🙂 ❤
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Oh, thank you so much! 😊
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