Paradise Lost

Photo credit @__y_818__.

Whatever it took, I did it,
ruining everything
I ever built with my beloved.
In the moment,
I didn’t care,
but in the aftermath,
I found I was in hell.

© Sarah Doughty

 For the #NovemberNotes challenge.
Hosted by myself and Rosema of A Reading Writer.
Today’s song is Criminal by Fiona Apple.
I’ll admit that Gods And Monsters by Lana Del Rey had some impact on this as well.


39 thoughts on “Paradise Lost”

  1. I may for some moments now
    Felt that I am in hell
    I was loving you from heart
    And you sent me away from there
    But those moments I cherish
    I felt it was heaven then
    So the one you who showed me heaven
    Cannot be the one to show hell
    Back again I see inside
    Love is still there
    Heart still loves us
    So I am in heaven still
    Whatever however I could do
    In love for you I did
    You were my beloved
    You will be my beloved still
    Apart we are now
    Maybe you felt the need
    Accept you are gone
    Heaven still I feel

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