It was there in the shadows, over your shoulder, lurking, waiting for its moment to strike. I met its eyes and I felt its intentions, the rage, and the way it slithered around like snakes, shrouded in the darkness. You froze, catching the look on my face. “Don’t look behind you,” I whispered.
But it wasn’t you that replied. “Too late,” it said in response before dragging you away. That was the last time I saw you.
© Sarah Doughty
What a great photo & Halloween piece!
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Ah, thank you! 😊 😊
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Goosebumps! Great for Halloween!
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Thank you! 😊
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I’m really loving you going dark, some great stuff 👍
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Thank you! 😊
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Awesome!
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Thank you! 😊
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Very macabre. I felt myself visualizing the evil being and trying to give it symbolic significance.
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It’s the unknown that does it. I gave just enough information to let you fill in what your mind wanted to see. Thank you so much for the kind words! 😊
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Wonderful work, Sarah!
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Thank you! 😊
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Of course 🙂
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now this is early morning goosebumps!! woah!
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😊 😊
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““Don’t look behind you,” I whispered.” this has to be the strongest reaffirmative statement after “i got you.” in spite of the imminent danger he/she stayed.
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Yes, I really adored that part. Thank you so much! 😊 😊 😊
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my pleasure!
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Another winner. I am a child of light with an appreciation for darkness and dark things. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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I’m glad you liked it, thank you! 😊 😊
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This brought a huge smile to my face. 🙂
I really enjoyed it. Nice seeing you write something for the time of year.
Fun! ^_^
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I’m glad you liked it. 😊 😊
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Spooky!
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Thank you, love! 😊 😊
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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An entire story with so few words. You’ve left me feeling a great loss. Awesome work, Sarah.
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Thank you, love! 😊 😊
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Darkness on fire!
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Thank you, love! 😊 😊
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This is awesome. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
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Thank you! That makes me happy! 😊
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yes I imagine you a good ghost story writer, lots of suspense, like the old hammer house of horrors I used to watch as a kid. Kirascribbled just scared the bejesus out of me : (
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Thank you! That was the goal!
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Oh that’s a good scary Halloween treat.
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Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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