Your darkness held my attention,
and everywhere your eyes
lingered, my skin tingled as if
it were your hands.
Something deep down
whispered a warning,
but I didn’t mind.
I wasn’t reading into this, because I was thinking that there are lovers of mine that would have felt this way. The danger would have been of their choosing and never to the point of harm, but that frission of fear would have been present.
BDSM wasn’t what I was referring to. In consensual relationships, I see no issues with it. Nor do I see it as dark or evil. This is more referring to the impending heartbreak, they know it will come, and the pain that will come with it, but in the moment, it doesn’t matter.
Yeah I can see that. Thanks for explaining. And yes, I’ve done that. Embraced the moment, always hoping that the fall I see at the end will somehow never come.
Definitely hard it is Sir….. Need to trust the gut they say and trust whatever happens was to happen…. No mistakes by life so no mistake by us….. We fall down and stand to walk again…. We do mistakes so that we learn and move into the life.
(hope it was okay I commented back… Hope no offences taken)
They will be…… We create our World…. The way we are the way people will be…. Once the we who are transformed… There will be a beautiful World, as beautiful as the Earth we are on.
Feeling your presence
In air and sound
Touch of breeze feels as if yours
Voice of Nature seems yours
The dark clouds went by
As thought of you came in
Moon you are the reason
Why this sun shines so bright
Sarah Doughty 
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Oh my, this gives me such deep shivers
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Oooh thank you! 😊
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beautiful and relatable. 🙂 ❤
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Aw thank you!
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always love! ❤
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Again, an amazing poem!
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Thank you!
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Ah, I wouldn’t mind either. This is exquisite and sensual at once, Sarah. <3<3<3
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Oooh, thank you for that! 😊 😊
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Excellent poem, loved the “warnings” line…
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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I found myself very immersed in this! Wonderful poetry. 🙂
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Very well written. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading! 😊
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Incredible!
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Aww thank you!
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“everywhere your eyes
lingered, my skin tingled as if
it were your hands.” <- I love this whole part and I can't even explain why. I just do. 😀
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Aww thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome! 😀
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I know some who has this exact reaction
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Unfortunately, I figured you might.
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Why unfortunately?
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I wished you didn’t have to experience it, or know people that have.
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I wasn’t reading into this, because I was thinking that there are lovers of mine that would have felt this way. The danger would have been of their choosing and never to the point of harm, but that frission of fear would have been present.
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BDSM wasn’t what I was referring to. In consensual relationships, I see no issues with it. Nor do I see it as dark or evil. This is more referring to the impending heartbreak, they know it will come, and the pain that will come with it, but in the moment, it doesn’t matter.
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Yeah I can see that. Thanks for explaining. And yes, I’ve done that. Embraced the moment, always hoping that the fall I see at the end will somehow never come.
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Yep, I understand.
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nice. the mysterious attracts, because the mysterious has an edge.
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Indeed it does. 😊
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It’s hard to know when to ignore those internal warnings and when to listen. I’ve made both mistakes at one time or another.
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Definitely hard it is Sir….. Need to trust the gut they say and trust whatever happens was to happen…. No mistakes by life so no mistake by us….. We fall down and stand to walk again…. We do mistakes so that we learn and move into the life.
(hope it was okay I commented back… Hope no offences taken)
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No offense at all. I love to see others’ thoughts 🙂
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Thank you Sir.
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You guys are awesome! I’m a lucky girl to have you here! 😊
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We are blessed to have met you on the journey of life.
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Oh, the flattery! Thank you! 😊
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Hmm do I flatter….. Then this must be some new teaching from You ☺.
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😊 😊
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I understand.
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So beautiful so mesmerizing…. Just wish to read again and again till I am no more and it simply is the being flowing with your words
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Aw, that’s so kind of you! 😊
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Well….. Kindness is the virtue we are.. Sharing what we are, right…. Saying out what we are…. Feeling what we are….
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You’re right about that. 😊 If only more people were.
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They will be…… We create our World…. The way we are the way people will be…. Once the we who are transformed… There will be a beautiful World, as beautiful as the Earth we are on.
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Indeed. 😊
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good night beautiful sweet lovely Soul.
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Goodnight!
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Thank you ☺
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Feeling your presence
In air and sound
Touch of breeze feels as if yours
Voice of Nature seems yours
The dark clouds went by
As thought of you came in
Moon you are the reason
Why this sun shines so bright
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Ah, this is so beautiful!
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Thank you for saying those words beautiful sweet lovely Soul, Sarah…. Your words inspire and your supporting comments are more full of motivation.
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Aww thank you!
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Welcome 😊
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I dream that one day, I achieve this art of giving strangers butterflies in the stomach only with a small, yet perfectly picked bouquet of words!
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You do. 😊
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I am going to frame this comment to put on my wall 😉 Thank you!
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Haha, you’re welcome.
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… And every word I read gave me a tingle… As if secrets shared between friends… But I didn’t mind… It was lovely 🙂
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Oooh, thank you!
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