I was meant to hug that man.
My body molded into his
in just the right way,
I felt like I could
stay there forever….
Safe, in his arms.
But it was only a dream.
© Sarah Doughty’s
Earthen Witch World Shorts
(Dream Spell)
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Dream Spell by @thesarahdoughty (that’s me!)
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Dream or reality .Is it matter. Our brain doesn’t now the difference
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That’s true. Thank you! 😊
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Wow this is so powerful
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Thank you! 😊
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The power of a dream! Follow my blog:mypastmynowmyforever.wordpress.com
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Thank you!
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As I read, I was smiling. The power of dream… Great description.
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Aw thank you so much! 😊
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I love that there are at least two possible interpretations for this short: Either this is someone she’s only seen in her dreams. Or he’s a real person that she’s fantasizing over but he doesn’t notice her/he’s already taken.
Either way, great short! Thought-provoking in all the right ways (as usual). 😀
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I like your viewpoints. It’s always nice to have more than one interpretation. The book refers to a real person she once new, and they are sharing a dream together, both conscious of what is happening, even though it’s not technically real.
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Thanks for sharing a beautiful word picture.
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Thank you for reading! 😊
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Oh my gosh, wow!
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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and i am close to melting already and then.. that last line!
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Aw thank you! I modified it slightly from the book. 😊
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Truly beautiful.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Technical perfection + explosive passion = a great poem
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Wow, thank you so much! 😊
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Oh my god! I love it. I really do.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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Oh, I’ve had this dream. It’s the kind where you hate that you woke up… ♥
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Ah, yep. I’ve been there. And they wake you up at the WRONG moment. 😆😆
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Always!
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You never disappoint. I always love reading what you write. 🙂
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Awww you honor me. 😊
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This is elegantly beautiful and simple. I love how you weave words to mean so much in so few lines.
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Aw thank you so much for the kind words. 😊
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happens to the best of us. funny how we never include these nocturnal affairs when asked ‘how many people have you gone out with.’ but that opening line blows the piece right open. how could she not control the dream to hug him. or it could also mean she couldn’t hug him in her conscious state but did in her subconscious state – like we all do. tricky! nice exercise for the brain.
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It was a slightly modified quote from Dream Spell. It was the feeling of her body molding into his for a perfect hug, thus being ‘meant’ to hug him. 😊😊
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i like how you’ve used it here
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Thank you! 😊
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Sometimes, dreams aren’t only dreams. Just my experience.
Lovely as always.
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That’s very true. In this case it was conscious dreaming. 😊
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