The fire in my veins
and burning, insatiable gaze
sentenced you to a
night of heaven
you would never forget.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Trial By Fire by @t.alva
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohhh very descriptive! Loved the words you chose. You packed in so much imagery in so few lines.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awww, thank you! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
So much vivid imagery in so little words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😊
LikeLike
Love this
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
💕💕💕 Reading the title I was expecting something else but it ended up being as beautiful as always!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😊 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
The title makes you think one thing, and the actual poem makes you think another, and I end up more fulfilled than if the poem had been cliché. Excellent as usual.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was hoping for that exact effect. Thank you so much! 😊 😊 😊
LikeLike
Short but incendiary and colourful. I love it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊 😊
LikeLike
This is Sizzling! Loved it
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊
LikeLike
you are on fire!!! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha, thanks, love! 😊
LikeLike
Sensually luring. Nice Sarah, very nice.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. It’s been awhile since I’ve done a sensual post. I’m glad you like it! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, ma’am!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ooh… I love it. ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, love! 😊 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That is the way it is! Works every time!! (<:
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
OOh! I love the prompt and your take on it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh thank you! 😊 😊 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome! ^.^
LikeLiked by 1 person
‘night of heaven.’ love the use of opposites here. it does take two … brilliant post.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
you welcome, Sarah.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is sexy!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, love! 😊 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
The only bad thing, would be the come down. ☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
Perhaps, it would depend on the afterglow. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well then. Makes me want to get to writing a steamy romance novel.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It doesn’t have to be graphic to make an impact. 😋
LikeLiked by 1 person