Let the sound of the trembling thunder scare away the nightmares, let the flashes of lightning burn these horrid images from my eyes, and let the rain wash away all my troubles until there’s nothing left but your storm and the lingering, peaceful scent of petrichor you leave behind.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
This Beautiful Curse by @kris_johnston_author
Beautiful
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Thank you! 😊
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Wow, that’s powerful writing!
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Wonderful! Although I’ll never be able to think of petrichor without thinking of Dr Who.
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Ha, I didn’t think of that.
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And now it’s going to stick 😀
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😊😊😊
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oh dear. this is one calming yet intense piece! ❤
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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most welcome, love! ❤
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This is beautiful (and taught me a new word – petrichor)! 🙂
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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Exceptional😊 quite powerful
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I’m honored, thank you! 😊
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💕💕💕💕💕
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Petrichor is just simply one of my favourite words. Lovely to see it so eloquently placed 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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This is so powerful and peaceful at the same time. Love it!
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Ah, thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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I love this. Okay, I had to look up ‘petrichor’–but I’m glad I did. The scent of rain on dry soil–I love how that calming that seems after the storm.
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You learn something new every day. I’m happy I was able to evoke that for you! 😊 😊
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Once my mother woke me and my brother up to watch an electrical storm. Lightning and thunder and rain blown sideways. She made us cocoa and wrapped us in a quilt she had knitted (it was the Sixties). It must have been over 45 years ago, but your blog brought it all back. Thank you.
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Aw, I’m so happy I could do that for you.
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I truly am so ever grateful. Just got off the untraceable disposable phone with my brother, and he recalls it the same. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome.
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What a lovely memory! 🙂
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Incredible.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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I really want to read this during a thunderstorm. It would be perfect!
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It would. 💕 I’m waiting for a storm so I can try to record it.
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Reblogged this on M. Matheson and commented:
I Love this dark poem, and I learned a new word.
pet·ri·chor
ˈpeˌtrīkôr/
noun
a pleasant smell that frequently accompanies the first rain after a long period of warm, dry weather.
“other than the petrichor emanating from the rapidly drying grass, there was not a trace of evidence that it had rained at all”
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Oh, thank you so much! I adore that word as well.
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I have always loved storms. One of my favorite songs perfectly captures the way I feel about storms. It’s called Lullaby for a Stormy Night by Vienna Tang. You can listen to it here:
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I have always loved them as well. I’ll check out the song, I don’t know if I’ve heard it. 😊😊
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“petrichor” – I like that. Reminds me of growing up at the far northern end of the Great Plains after a very noisy, very flashy, often with little rain… passing summer storm. Just enough wetness so kids could go out sliding in the gumbo barefoot. Simple pleasures so important at the time, so missed now surrounded by the concrete jungle.
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Ah, I wish I had memories like that to remember. Any good ones are too far in between. 💕
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You are creating memories for all of us!!
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Aw thank you. 😊😊
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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading! 😊 😊
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‘… nothing left but your storm.’ like the rumbling at the end of Seal’s song, Love’s Divine, the idea of a storm hasn’t sounded more positive in a while for me. brilliant piece.
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Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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you know what i already think of your writing, and this one is no exception. i just love the use of opposites in this piece.
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Ah, thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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always
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Your writing touches a chord
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Aw, I’m sorry that it does. But thank you. 💕
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Perfect. Powerful. Pretty damn good.
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Haha, thank you as always! 😊 😊 😊
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So well worded.
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊
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Beautiful.
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Aw thank you!
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