If I could take it all back, all the wrong things I ever said, all at the wrong time, those unexpected moments where I bared my soul, I would. In those moments, I was vulnerable, hypnotized by your gaze as it locked with mine. At the time it was exhilarating, to feel you and how those deep eyes saw right through me. But now, I wish I could rewind and stop you from knocking down my defenses and shield myself from the pain of losing you. But I can’t. And I’m haunted by your memory. Haunted by all we were, all we could have been, and everything we lost.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Your Ink On My Soul by @c.strigas_sexyasspoet
I tell you, I never scrolled this much to write a comment. 😀
Sarah, all the posts are beautiful. Lovely writings.
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Thank you so much. I do tend to receive a lot of comments. I’ll check to see if there’s a way to have the comment box above the comment section. But it could be a theme issues that I might not be able to fix. Nonetheless, I am grateful you took the time to scroll to leave your thoughts. 😊
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Literrally felt that emotion as I read this piece. Invoked that loss in my life.
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I’m sorry you did, but know that you aren’t alone. 💕
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I feel this so strongly as well. The emotion is clear and I can (sadly) relate. Love your writing.
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Thank you, I’m honored! 😊 😊
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I love your style of writing.. I enjoy every bit of it
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Thank you! I’m honored! 😊 😊
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a few words and yet touching the soul……
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Thank you!
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This is so true – I can empathise with these emotions. Powerfully, yet delicately, expressed.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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SO powerful, especially that last bit xx
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Wow
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Thank you! 😊
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Wow post different unique
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I’m sorry for the delay in responding. Apparently WP decided this was spam. Thank you for the kind words! 🙂
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Oh my god this is so beautiful!!
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Ah, I love this Sarah! Yes, memories can be mercilessly cruel.
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Indeed they can, thanks, love! 😊
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*sigh* I do hope they’re not so tormenting.
You’re most welcome! 🙂 🙂
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In time, they become less of a haunt and more of a memory.
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Looking forward to that day… 🙂
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Me too, for some of them.
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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This is so fitting, since I am finally getting used to the idea that he’s just not coming back, and moving on is becoming less scary. Especially after writing about it being scary, which was a nice release.
Extremely well done, I am so impressed!
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome. ❤
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I really like this one, because it could be about a significant other who died or it could be about breaking up with that one perfect person. It could be even be about ending a toxic relationship (if you read it all wrong 😆 ). Or I could just be reading too much into it. But I do love that last line. 🙂
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That’s exactly why I wrote it this way. There could be several different meanings and every person can most likely relate to one or more of them. 😊 💕
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🙂
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😊
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this pierces the heart, love. the pain, the regret, the longing. ❤
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Aw thank you, love.
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you are most welcome, S! 😀
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😊😊😊
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Amazing.
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Thank you, love! 😊
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Wrecked me. So great poem.
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Aw thank you! 😊
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Deeper than a well, full of great lines ☺
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Wow. I’ve felt that way, too. But these words speaks it like I never could. Thanks.
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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*Clapping* Brilliant, Sarah! Absolutely brilliant!
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Thank you! 😊 😊 😊
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You’re utmost welcome 🙂
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This is brilliant.
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Thank you! 😊
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regre’s. brilliant piece.
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Thank you! 😊
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anytime!
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That really was haunting.
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Oh thank you!
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Welcome 🙂
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Wow, this is beautiful and sad. Powerful.
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Thank you, love! I’m honored! 😊
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my pleasure. 🙂
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Beautifully expressed 👌🏻 specially the last part “all we could have been ”
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Thank you! I’m honored! 😊
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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This is a masterpiece.
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Oh, thank you so much.
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The same “ghosts” haunt me as well. I’m learning to peacefully coexist with them in the hope they will fade in time.
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I’m sorry to hear that. I am as well.
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I love this one also. It’s how many of us feel much of the time. You nailed it.
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Hey, love. I have no idea why, but WP decided your comment was spam. I just noticed it. I’m very grateful for the kindness and support. Thank you! 🙂
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Dearest one, you are so welcome, I noticed WP has been doing that lately I don’t know why, though most are when there is an external link it happens even when it’s not sometimes. Grrr. Thank you for your continuing inspiration as a writer and poet.
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Thank you for your continuing support and for your words as well. I always love to read them! 😊
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Thank you because you’re one of the crowned forest fairies of WP so that’s high praise indeed xo (but even if you were not, I’d still be smiling!)
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Haha, that made me smile. I don’t know when or how I became a crowned forest fairy, but I’m honored to have the title. 😊😊
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