My dreams were crushed and incinerated, leaving behind an infinity of darkness. After so long, I see it. A little glimmer of hope. A diamond in the roughened distance. Perhaps it’s a mirage. Maybe I can find a way to reach it. But until then, I’m trapped in this oblivion of misery. Do I choose to feel? To let in all the pain and hurt? To acknowledge that my heart was ripped from me. That every last drop of ink was siphoned from it. And then I watched as it was tossed to the side like trash. With every breath I take — inhale, exhale — I am doing all I can to keep from crumbling into a million pieces of my broken soul.
© Sarah Doughty
For the ‘Support Insta Writers’ August Prompts
(based on books written by authors in the IG community)
hosted by Tracy and Journee.
Diamond In The Rough by @diamondmamipoems
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shifts the meaning and changes the expression “diamond in the rough.”
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Indeed, thank you!
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my pleasure
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“A diamond in the roughened distance.” i like the shift in adjective in this line.
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I really liked that one too. It felt more tangible.
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i know what you mean.
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I can feel everything you wrote! Amazing! ❤️❤️❤️
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Aw thank you! 😊 😊
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the beautiful words you used made the agony, the pain the misery so vivid and so tangible, Sarah. ❤
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Aw thank you! 😊
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you are always welcome! 😀
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Beautiful as always and so what depth!
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Thank you, love! 😊 😊
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Most welcome, Sarah 🙂
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Beautiful as always. I love the depth of your words.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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Great depth Sarah, especially that last line
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Quite impactful! I could feel the weight of your words.
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Amazing! Incredible depth.
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Damn! Amazing!
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Aw, thank you!! 🙂
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Wow… you have written my thoughts today right here with beautiful words.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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Beautiful, so nice a post!
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Damn, all the visuals, and wordsmithing present. Great writing.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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How beautiful this was.Such a powerful one.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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My pleasure.:)
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An instant Heartstring Eulogies classic. Bravo. It was powerful in its description. Providing vivid images of this tremendous loss.
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Aww thank you! 😊 😊
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This is what I feel when my words are rejected. :o(
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Never give up! And thank you.
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