I handed my heart
to the moon
for safe keeping,
knowing she was the one
that could protect it at all costs.
© Sarah Doughty
For the Word-High July Prompts
of Filipino words,
hosted by Rosema and Maria.
Habilin – (n.) item given for safe keeping
From a Reggae song called “Tell the Girl How You Feel”
I asked how to write you a love song,
I didn’t need it to be very long
They say, “The moon has your tune
But you need to leave soon
Or the tune will just pack up and get gone”
So I found me a boat and rowed to the moon
Where I asked for that crazy old tune
The lady that was there say, “Don’t be no square
Or go lookin’ everywhere
For what’s as simple as a song about love”
This little exercise has done more to cast the clouds and shadows out of your writing than an extra rinse and spin cycle. It’s nice to see you where the sun shines. Keep it up.
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Oh wow. Thank you for sharing this with me! And thank you for the kind words. 😊
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Interesting to note, that every month I do a full moon exercise. It’s tonight. Supposed to increase intuition. But, at some point, you can just think about the moon, and that’s enough. I’m going to step outside and do it. I don’t howl at the moon, it would wake the neighbors. Like the poem. It says a lot.
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Yes, that might be a little strange, but I agree. The moon holds plenty of intuition. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! 😊
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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oh dear. 🙂 This reminds me of your lovely chapbook. ❤
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Yes, I sort of realized that after I wrote this. It’s similar to one of the poems in the chapbook, but not the same. 😊😊
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Yes, somehow related but not the same. 🙂
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I would have protected it for you. Good write.
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Aw thank you! 😊 I’m sure the moon might’ve appreciated it. 😆
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Lol
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Beautiful expression… ❤ (had to do that again – someone had his say at the same time as me)
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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Love the feeling behind this.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Beautiful expression… ❤
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Great image ☺ On the dark side?
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Haha, not really. Just carefully camouflaged. 😊
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☺
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and she knows how to keep safe.
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Ah, yes she does. 💕
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