I felt the air thicken
with humidity as electricity
crawled up my arm,
setting my nerve endings
on fire. By the time it faded,
I was already enchanted.
© Sarah Doughty
For the Word-High July Prompts
of Filipino words,
hosted by Rosema and Maria.
Marahuyo – (adj.) be enchanted
And by the time this ended, we are all beyond enchanted. ❤️❤️❤️
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Aw, thank you! 😊
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Truly enchanting. 🙂 I love how you’ve left so much unsaid and open to the reader’s interpretation. Beautifully done.
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Ah, thank you! 😊 😊
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subtly sensual, beautifully passionate!
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Thanks so much, love! 😊
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most welcome!! 😀
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I like it – enchantment by (maybe) magic!
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Yes! Thank you!
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Oh I do like this one!
Ellespeth
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Beautiful !
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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Oh Wowza! Good write!
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Oh, thank you! 😊 😊
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Welcome.
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Beautiful piece Sarah. Really loved the rhythm in this one.
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Oh, thank you! 😊 😊
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Captivating piece Sarah! You’ve enchanted me with this piece yet again. Bravo!
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Oh, thank you! 😊 😊
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You’re most welcome ❤
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This is my favorite of the works I’ve seen from you so far.
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Thanks so much! 😊 😊 😊
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sounds like e.t’s thought when he made contact with the kid in the movie of the same name. powerful imagistic writing.
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Oh, thank you. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen that movie.
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Massive applause for this micro 👏
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Thanks so much! 😊
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Reblogged this on WordDancer in the Sky and commented:
Your best so far!
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Wow What a good one. Funny thing is, I just peaked in WordPress looking for you and another favorite writer of mine, when this post popped up. Wish you and yours a lovely weekend full of sunshine and smiles.
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Thanks so much! I hope the same for you! 😊
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