We filled the space between worlds
with a silence so deafening,
it generated its own gravity,
forming a new planet devoid
of color, brilliance, emotion,
and sound. It was barren,
just like us.
© Sarah Doughty
For the #MayBookPrompts – Brave New World
You don’t say much, but oh boy when you do…
” devoid
of color, brilliance, emotion,
and sound. It was barren,
just like us.”
Yes, Gawd SARAH!!!
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You’re so kind. Thank you so much! 😊
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it just flows, Sarah. it flows beautifully until that ending! Great, as always!
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Thanks so much! 😊 😊
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Stunning work
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Thank you so much!
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As always, Sarah, – economy of words, wealth of feelings. Wonderful stuff.
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Thank you so much!
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Fantastic!
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Thank you!
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Wow, you’re good! Love this, Sarah….the space between worlds. So fine 🙂
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Thanks so much! 😊
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😀
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Geez! This is just amazing! Everything you write just rolls off the tongue so wonderfully!
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I’m honored, thank you! 😊 😊
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You’re welcome!
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Sad, but written so well 🙂
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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What a tremendous write. Wow. Honestly, it inspiored me on a potential story.
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That’s amazing! I’m so happy to hear that!
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Holy! Best yet, Sarah. Love it!
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Ah, thank you! 😊 😊
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Powerfully evocative!
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Thank you! 😊
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I think I have to go with the bleak but brilliant comment above. So much conveyed in so few words!
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Thanks so much! 😊
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Interesting thought process here.
Very profound!
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Thanks so much! 😊
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☺ 🌷
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Bleak, but brilliant
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Yes, definitely. Thank you.
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This hits home with me. Wonderful work as always 🙂
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Oh thank you so much! 😊
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Anytime 🙂 never read anything by you I didn’t like.
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