Poetry

Tracheal Moss

My solitude extended for so long
that my voice atrophied
and my trachea filled with moss and roots.
A caterpillar found its way inside
and nestled itself atop my voice box.
By the time I found a reason to speak,
the moth emerged, silencing me once more.

Β© Sarah Doughty

For the #MayBookPrompts – A Hundred Years Of Solitude

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49 thoughts on “Tracheal Moss”

  1. Aww…I saw the end of this one coming. For someone with the voice of butterflies you should give your first person self one once in a while…

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  2. eh, talking is overrated. I felt this way traveling alone in a foreign country where I couldn’t speak the language. Interesting use of tracheal in this context as it is more of a clinical term, but even more so, for me it echoes treacle or treacly, cloyingly sweet, thick and syrupy to the point of choking.

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  3. You are so creative! And your grace, ease and ability with words, languages, and constructing phrases, is so masterful – you are, truly, a very gifted writer/poet/artist πŸ˜€

    Absolutely loved this piece!

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  4. Amazing, even though I don’t get the reference to the moth. However, on the cover of the “Silence of the Lambs” DVD, there’s a girl’s face with a moth on her mouth. Is that what you are referencing to, and what is the significance of the moth as silencer? Is it mythology… or some more modern idea?

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    1. Sort of like Silence of the Lambs. The concept is that the throat wasn’t used for so long that it became a perfect place for a caterpillar to cocoon itself and emerge as a moth, which would then reinforce the silence. The killer in the movie left a moth as his signature in his victims. The moth is significant because they’re like the ugly, dirty cousins to butterflies. It would have a much lighter effect if a butterfly emerged rather than a moth. So, if you’d person are too speak, what would come out would be dark and gruesome, rather than beautiful. Does that answer your question?

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