Deafening Silence Poetry Your silence breaks my heart and those pieces of me that remain want nothing more than to hear your song once more. © Sarah Doughty Share this:EmailFacebookLinkedInPinterestPocketPrintRedditTumblrTwitterLike Loading... Related
I have friends embedded in my soul that too often live their life in such a bubble without me. It breaks my heart. LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m about the musicality of a line a lot of the time. It just intrigues me how others, like Sarah work. LikeLiked by 1 person
Why not say ‘again’? I’m interested as to your word choices oh wistful one! ~ P ~ LikeLiked by 1 person
I did kind of think it’d a bit ‘sad Hallmark card’ and obvious… but there you go. Subverting expectation is good for the literary palette. 😉 Not for or against by any means! LikeLiked by 3 people
I thought it felt a little more lyrical, like it would flow off the tongue a little better that way. LikeLike
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Ooohhh . . . that’s good . . . 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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I have friends embedded in my soul that too often live their life in such a bubble without me. It breaks my heart.
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Yes, I know that feeling as well. Thanks.
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Beautiful. I can relate to this one. Silence can be more painful than words
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Yes it can. Thanks as always for reading Tosha! 😊
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I’m about the musicality of a line a lot of the time. It just intrigues me how others, like Sarah work.
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I’m a mystery. 😎
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*it’d be.
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Why not say ‘again’? I’m interested as to your word choices oh wistful one! ~ P ~
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Again is too boring! And so not whimsical! Lol
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I did kind of think it’d a bit ‘sad Hallmark card’ and obvious… but there you go. Subverting expectation is good for the literary palette. 😉 Not for or against by any means!
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Lol true
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Yeah, not trying to go for the Hallmark vibe here. 😂😂
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Thanks, love! 😊
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I thought it felt a little more lyrical, like it would flow off the tongue a little better that way.
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