I didn’t know the man standing in front of me, but I couldn’t look away. Seeing him turned me into a live wire. Everything felt electrified and amplified. Like every nerve ending screamed for him.
There was something about the way he was looking at me. With those infinite blue depths, it reminded me of the ocean. Not like the tropical islands near the equator, but more like the stormy, winter seas near the Arctics.
It felt like he could see me. All of me.
And I wanted nothing more in that moment than to taste those perfectly rounded lips, upturned into a faint smile that I knew was meant only for me. I wanted to feel the smoothness of his hair. Breathe him in, and revel in the feel of his skin against mine.
All while losing myself in his eyes.
It was illogical. Crazy even. Because I didn’t know who he was.
But I still wanted it. All of it.
Forever.
© Sarah Doughty
This is part 1 of Him.
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This was also published at UInk.ca.
I normally don’t read first-person perspectives, but this one was certainly interesting. The instant attraction, the way the nerves all seemed to come alive — this is one rather good way to describe that spark many call ‘love at first sight.’
Good job.
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Aw thank you. I’ve definitely strayed a little from the traditional romance, which alternates between a third person POV. I think it really helps to immerse into a story, so you can, in a sense, become them. From my experience, it adds a level of depth you can’t really attain with that traditional style. 😊 If you enjoyed that style, you might like my books. They’re all free. 😊😊
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Perhaps I’ll take a look, sometime soon. I do enjoy a good story.
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Thank you! 😊
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Whoa! Just started reading and I must say that I was hooked from the first paragraph.
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Thank you! 😊 😊
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You’re welcome. I am hoping to catch up when I get home. You have such a way with words!
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I really appreciate that. Thank you!
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wow.. on to the next..
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😊😊😊😊
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I’m bookmarking to read it later tonight.
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Awesome, thank you!
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“Seeing him turned me into a live wire.” is one of the best opening sentences i’ve read. Really good sentence.
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Thank you so much! 😊 😊
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Oh, please, I want: gimme, gimme, gimme, please, I want, I want… In other words, loving it. On to part deux.
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Awesome! 😊
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Reblogged this on The Melodramatic Confessions of Carla Louise and commented:
It’s so good! Read all seven parts!! 🙂
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Thank you!
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No problems! It’s so good! I’m almost at the end of the next one!!
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I’m glad you like it!
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Would you mind if I reblogged the beginning? I love it so much. But I just thought I’d ask first 🙂
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You are more than welcome to reblog it. 😊
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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sigh….. woah I love this…sorry I missed it. Excited to be catching up. You are incredible!
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Always, love! 😊
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While I don’t know the rest of this story it sounds so incredibly familiar, down to the words you used to describe him and his affect on you. Very, very well written.
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Thank you very much. I thought it might be a good idea to bring out a bit of the “adult” aspects of my writing that’s found in my books. Though it is a little reminiscent of my first novel, it’s going to be a little different as the story evolves over time. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. 🙂
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